diff --git a/writing/post-self/toledot/launch/sys/Ioan/008.md b/writing/post-self/toledot/launch/sys/Ioan/008.md
index d0767cb5..1f745428 100644
--- a/writing/post-self/toledot/launch/sys/Ioan/008.md
+++ b/writing/post-self/toledot/launch/sys/Ioan/008.md
@@ -140,6 +140,6 @@ Ey paused, halfway into the bed.
 
 Ey thought about all of the things Sadiah had said, all of the things ey'd learned about the Odists these last few weeks, both on eir own and through eir communications with the Codrins. Ey thought about all of the ways in which, whether or not they were true, this spoke to a level of manipulation that ey'd not suspected before. Ey thought, also, about how truly caught up in it ey was.
 
-And then ey nodded anyway, finished crawling into bed, and let May play with eir hair.
+And then ey nodded anyway, finished crawling into bed, and let May play with eir hair as ey rested eir head on her lap.
 
 Ey felt helpless to do anything but.