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@ -68,8 +68,8 @@ End Of Endings — 2403 / Rye — 2409
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* [O] [002](002) --- The Woman runs into Her Friend, who is having a very bad day, and shares her idea / Saving Geppetto — 3292
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* Going walking
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* Meeting her friend and knowing joy
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* [O] [003](003) --- The Woman sees why Her Friend was having a bad day (seventh only ever says talk to a therapist rather than offering friendship, tenth does the same sometimes, narrator starts to peek through), has a similar bad day / Swallowed by the big fish — 4080
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* The woman experiences joy
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* [O] [003](003) --- The Woman sees why Her Friend was having a bad day (seventh only ever says talk to a therapist rather than offering friendship, tenth does the same sometimes, narrator starts to peek through), has a similar bad day / Swallowed by the big fish — 4080
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* The turn away from joy spoiled
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* The woman's cocladist talks of suffering
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* [O] [004](004) --- The Woman aims for greater pleasure to try and re-ground herself, narrator questions pleasure vs productivity, and what of joy / Pleasure Island — 8081
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@ -99,7 +99,7 @@ End Of Endings — 2403 / Rye — 2409
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* Connection between joy and unbecoming/haste of CA (group A)
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* Connection between stillness and unbecoming (group A)
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* Unbecoming conversation with her friend (group A to new chapter?)
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* [ ] [009](009) --- The Woman talks with Dry Grass with her idea, who mentions Serene, they talk and she turns into a tree on a sidewalk in the city sim, unclear if she quits, the narrator struggles with how they feel about this, modern vs postmodern, earnest vs ironic, subversion vs playing straight, living vs not, devolves into repeated phrases as Rye overflows / Carved from wood
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* [O] [009](009) --- The Woman talks with Dry Grass with her idea, who mentions Serene, they talk and she turns into a tree on a sidewalk in the city sim, unclear if she quits, the narrator struggles with how they feel about this, modern vs postmodern, earnest vs ironic, subversion vs playing straight, living vs not, devolves into repeated phrases as Rye overflows / Carved from wood
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* Dry Grass visits Rye to talk this through, accidentally convince each other
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* Dry Grass helps The Woman, Rye loses her shit
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