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@@ -246,9 +246,13 @@ The skunk sat up and gave em an exaggerated frown. "I am warning you, young man.
 
 Ey rolled eir eyes. "'Young man?'"
 
+"Little miss?"
+
+Ey laughed.
+
 "Young gentlethem."
 
-Ey laughed. "I learned it from you, May."
+Ey laughed. "I don't know what your hang-up is, you nut. I learned it from you."
 
 "What, 'fuck you too'?" The skunk shook her head. "It just sounds so strange coming from your mouth."