From 82d447afe527f87b9ecfd528298b7bba108b7838 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Madison Scott-Clary Date: Sat, 30 Apr 2022 17:00:11 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] update from sparkleup --- writing/3/unknown-things/iyov/1-framing-devices.md | 10 +++++----- writing/3/unknown-things/iyov/index.md | 4 ++-- 2 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) diff --git a/writing/3/unknown-things/iyov/1-framing-devices.md b/writing/3/unknown-things/iyov/1-framing-devices.md index c308300f..0db65711 100644 --- a/writing/3/unknown-things/iyov/1-framing-devices.md +++ b/writing/3/unknown-things/iyov/1-framing-devices.md @@ -119,13 +119,13 @@ So far, however, we have just looked at the framing device. Happily-ever-afters [^1intercalary]: A fantastic spot for the word 'intercalary', those days that fit between the years which do not fall within the calendar. > A year starts not on January first. - > The days may hunder but the seasons speak + >     The days may hunder but the seasons speak > of time's long march, of fast time, slow time. Thirst - > for "start" and "end" neglects the limen sleek. + >     Tfor "start" and "end" neglects the limen sleek. > So, why do some unsubtle sciences - > forget about the in-betweens? Those pure + >     Tforget about the in-betweens? Those pure > uncolored dreams made mere contrivances; - > "between the years" now simply: "year, then year". + >     T"between the years" now simply: "year, then year". > > \parencite[3]{eigengrau} @@ -135,4 +135,4 @@ So far, however, we have just looked at the framing device. Happily-ever-afters [^1avoided]: It need not be permanent, of course. When the me who I was died and I lived my intercalary life, terror filled me, yes, but not for long. Matthew died, and I was nothing but fear for years, and then Madison was born, replacing fear. -[^1iworry]: Or, well, I worry. I do not think many apologists worry, and this is not a work of apologetics. +[^1iworry]: Or, well, *I* worry. I do not think many apologists worry, and this is not a work of apologetics. diff --git a/writing/3/unknown-things/iyov/index.md b/writing/3/unknown-things/iyov/index.md index fcde78bc..5f851b80 100644 --- a/writing/3/unknown-things/iyov/index.md +++ b/writing/3/unknown-things/iyov/index.md @@ -3,8 +3,8 @@ Something like "Seasons" except about growth through the death of the self and how Job fails in that. 1. [Framing devices](1-framing-devices) -2. [Friends and "Friends"](2-friends) -3. [Interpolations](3-interpolations) +2. [Interpolations](3-interpolations) NB: switched below +3. [Friends and "Friends"](2-friends) 4. [Unknown things](4-unknown) (theodicy) 5. [Should all things be known](5-known) (what if the pals really did solve theodicy)