update from sparkleup

writing/post-self/mitzvot/035.md

@@ -312,9 +312,9 @@ May rolled her eyes.
 
 "Get out. All of you."
 
-The rest of the stanza left, quit, or were swept --- the sim didn't seem to render them any different. Ioan guessed swept, given that Guōwe
+The rest of the stanza left, quit, or were swept --- the sim didn't seem to render them any different. Ioan guessed swept, given that Guōweī's unconscious form also disappeared.
 
-All through Jonas's tirade, Sasha wore a slight smile. It wasn't beatific, wasn't enlightened. She simply looked present. She looked confident in herself in some more earnest way. When it was clear that he was finished, she bowed politely.
+All through Jonas's tirade, Sasha wore a half smile. It wasn't beatific, wasn't enlightened. She simply looked present. She looked confident in herself in some more earnest way than she had in years. When it was clear that he was finished, she bowed politely.
 
 "See you around?"
 
@@ -322,57 +322,69 @@ All through Jonas's tirade, Sasha wore a slight smile. It wasn't beatific, wasn'
 
 She laughed and reached out to take Ioan's hand in eir paw, then they stepped back home, followed closely by May holding End Waking's paw.
 
-((Out on the plain b/c E.W.))
+Once back on the plain, End Waking groaned and fell to his knees, paws digging into the soil around the tussocks of grass, then quit. May and Ioan followed suit.
+
+When their down-tree instances returned to the field from inside, they were just in time to see True Name bow to Sasha and quit. It was the last change, ey supposed, the true relinquishing of her name.
 
 There was a long moment of silence in the living room, then Ioan let out a ragged, pent-up breath, eir shoulders sagging. "Can someone tell me what the fuck just happened?"
 
-"Sasha found the one thing she could have done to piss off Jonas," May said, looking at her appraisingly. "He went in thinking he'd take everything from her and left with no wind in his sails. Well done, my dear."
+"Sasha found the one thing she could have done to piss off Jonas," May said, grinning. "He went in thinking he'd take everything from her and left with no wind in his sails. Well done, my dear."
 
 Sasha beamed and bowed with a flourish
 
 "And you knew this?" ey asked.
 
-She shook her head. "I saw her unwind all of the changes from the last centuries--"
+She nodded. "To an extent. WE had discussed several options, but many of the changes were new. I saw her unwind all of the changes from the last centuries--"
 
 "All the way back to Praiseworthy's suggestions before Secession," the other skunk said proudly.
 
 "--and other than the spotted skunk thing, she looks just like...well, Sasha. Nice touch, by the way."
 
-"I do not think I could have gotten away with staying that similar, but yes, I am back to the me of... Shit, when did I make Sasha like this? 2110?"
+"I do not think I could have gotten away with staying that similar, but yes, I am back to the me of... Shit, when did I make Sasha like this? 2112?"
 
 Ioan shook eir head, dizzy. "This is what you looked like before uploading?"
 
 "What my --- *our* --- av looked like, yes, all except the change to a spotted skunk. They always felt too flashy, back then, and I just wanted to look like myself offline except a furry. Completely unremarkable and a species no one likes."
 
-"It was the outfit that did it," End Waking said. "It always was our favorite, but for some reason, we never brought it with us to the System."
+"It was the outfit that did it for me," End Waking said. "It always was our favorite, but for some reason, we never brought it with us to the System."
 
 Sasha nodded.
 
 "I am proud of you, Sasha," he continued. "I do not yet know why I feel compelled to say that, but I am proud of you. You have much to make up for, your own penance yet to serve, but that you have done this at all is good step forward."
 
-Ioan sighed and pulled a chair out from the dining table and sat down heavily. "You're all completely nuts."
+Ioan sighed and sat down heavily in the grass. "You're all completely nuts."
 
 The three skunks laughed.
 
-"So," ey said, organizing eir thoughts out loud. "May and End Waking merged down and you... I guess feel more complete with those identities? Enough to head back to who you were before the clade began, I mean. Is that even possible?"
+"Why didn't you tell me?"
 
-"It is not a statement of reality, my dear. I cannot reintegrate those aspects of myself that are not up-tree from me, and even if I could, there are those who no longer exist or who have left Lagrange," she said, that slight smile growing. "It is a statement of hope, perhaps, or a desire for completion. It is an understanding of the ways in which I fall short expressed in my very name. Will this sense of a more complete life last? Perhaps. It will certainly not always feel good, and will at some point cease feeling new, but I plan on owning it for as long as I am able."
+"For your story," Sasha said. "You had to go in there with an untainted view in order to write a more earnest story at the end."
+
+"So," ey said, organizing eir thoughts out loud. "May and End Waking merged down and you...I guess feel more like you used to? Back phys-side, I mean. Enough to head back to who you were before the clade began, I mean. Is that even possible?"
+
+"It is not a statement of reality, dear. I cannot reintegrate those aspects of myself that are not up-tree from me, and even if I could, there are those who no longer exist or who have left Lagrange," she said, that slight smile growing. "It is a statement of hope, perhaps, or a desire for completion. It is an understanding of the ways in which I fall short expressed in my very name. Will this sense of a truer life last? Perhaps. It will certainly not always feel good, and will at some point cease feeling new, but I plan on owning it for as long as I am able."
 
 "And how is it that this pisses of Jonas?" Ey snorted. "He certainly sounded pissed."
 
-Sasha pulled out the chair across from Ioan and sat down, followed shortly by May and End Waking to either side of em. It was strange to see so many smiles around the table, still strange to see May so happy around her down-tree instance --- at least logistically, if no longer spiritually --- and stranger still to see End Waking even near her.
+Sasha knelt across from Ioan, followed shortly by May and End Waking to either side of em. It was strange to see so many smiles, still strange to see May so happy around her down-tree instance and stranger still to see End Waking even near her.
 
 "What Jonas was suspecting was for me to remain True Name in everything except form and name," she said. "He was expecting someone deeply cowed by his political genius. And do not underestimate him, he *is* still a genius. He felt that he had won his spot as rightful leader of Lagrange, if such a thing can even be said to exist. He had beaten me down and left me either unable to continue or unwilling to try."
 
-Ioan jumped at a brief sensorium ping, a request to enter, followed shortly by Debarre popping into existence behind May, who had apparently admitted him. "What was so urgent that you pulled me out of the woods and..." he trailed off, squinting at this new skunk at the table. "Who...but you're...what?"
+May added, "I suspect that he is starting to crack."
 
-"Debarre," Sasha said, bowing her head. "A pleasure to see you."
+Ioan nodded.
+
+"Perhaps," Sasha said. "He has not been grounded in years, but again, do not underestimate him."
+
+Ioan jumped at a brief sensorium ping, a request to enter, followed shortly by Debarre popping into existence behind May, who had apparently admitted him. "What was so urgent that you pulled me away from lunch and..." he trailed off, squinting at this new skunk. "Who...but you're...what?"
+
+Sasha stiffened where she knelt. "Debarre," she said, bowing her head. "A pleasure to see you."
 
 The weasel said nothing, looking stunned.
 
 "This is-- was Tr--"
 
-"Sasha. I am Sasha, and I was her as well," she said, voice gentle but insistent enough to stop Ioan from continuing.
+"Sasha. I am Sasha. I was her as well," she said, voice gentle but insistent enough to stop Ioan from continuing.
 
 He stepped back a half pace, crouching as though to flee. "Sasha...? What the fuck?"
 
@@ -388,13 +400,17 @@ Debarre hesitated.
 
 "If I am still here, do you not think that I agree with her? At least to a large enough extent to trust her?"
 
-The weasel straightened up and, when May waved a fifth chair into existence beside End Waking, he slowly sat down, resting only on the edge as though still ready to bolt. "I'll listen, but this had better be good."
+The weasel straightened up and, when May gestured to the spot beside End Waking, he slowly lowered himself to a crouch as though still ready to bolt. "I'll listen, but this had better be good."
 
-Sasha bowed, sitting quietly while May caught him up on the events of the past few days, letting the other three of them interject with corrections and confirmations. Throughout, Debarre waited, and while he didn't relax fully, by the end of the discussion, he was at least sitting all the way back in his chair.
+Sasha bowed, sitting quietly while May caught him up on the events of the past few months, letting the other three of them interject with corrections and confirmations. Throughout, Debarre waited, and while he didn't relax fully, by the end of the discussion, he was at least sitting all the way down.
 
-"So you're now this new Sasha," he said slowly. "I'll buy that, though you still make me nervous."
+"So you're now Sasha," he said slowly. 
 
-She laughed. "Do not worry, my dear. I make myself nervous."
+"A new Sasha. Related, but not the same Sasha you and I remember."
+
+"I'll buy that at least," he muttered. "You still make me really fucking nervous."
+
+She smiled faintly. "Do not worry, my dear. I make myself nervous."
 
 At the affectionate *my dear*, the weasel jolted back.
 
@@ -412,7 +428,7 @@ She nodded. "And May."
 
 Ioan sat up straight once more, nodding. "You were saying that Jonas thought he'd beaten you."
 
-"Right, yes. He thought that he had left me broken that I might fade away or even quit of my own accord. Instead, I became the one thing he could not control."
+"Right, yes. He thought that he had left so me broken that I might fade away or even quit of my own accord. Instead, I became the one thing he could not control."
 
 "How, though?" ey asked.
 
@@ -422,7 +438,7 @@ Ioan sat up straight once more, nodding. "You were saying that Jonas thought he'
 
 "--by coming after me. Not only that, but with the expectation that the Sasha who was on the Council was in the right when seen in contrast to True Name, I will be seen as a balancing force rather than a co-conspirator. Him working against that risks being seen as either unbalancing an effective system or a return to a two-party system that no one wants."
 
-"It is not a win, *per se*," End Waking added. "She has not beaten Jonas or anything like that, but she has entered into a stalemate with him."
+"It is not a win, *per se*," End Waking added. "She has not beaten Jonas, but she has entered into a stalemate with him."
 
 "Can't he still come after you, though? It's not like the whole System knows."
 
@@ -432,15 +448,27 @@ Ioan sat up straight once more, nodding. "You were saying that Jonas thought he'
 
 "Of course, but if he had decided to take Sasha out anyway, you would still be left to write about *that*. Your name is already trusted enough on the System that if you were to write something after her assassination, it would still have gone poorly for him. If he had taken you out as well --- something I doubt he was prepared to do anyway --- he would be in even deeper shit."
 
-Ey shook eir head. Ey was feeling very much the foil ((check; reason for others to infodump)) but needed to understand if ey was to write this book. More, ey needed to understand for emself. "So why not become Michelle?"
+Ey shook eir head. Ey was feeling very far behind but needed to understand if ey was to write this book. More, ey needed to understand for emself. "So why not become Michelle?"
 
 "Because look at me," Sasha said, laughing and spreading her arms. "I am a furry. A *skunk* furry, no less. There is benefit to being something that is just a little silly, just as there always has been. Even after all these years, it is difficult to take someone pretending to be a small furry animal seriously, so that disarms me in the eyes of the observers."
 
-((He answers to his desire for power, I answer only to my desire for stability and continuity. In that I am earnest in my conviction. More about politics as a means to an end, good at it, enjoy it, willing and able to use it --- When did you realize --- All the way back to that conversation about Sasha and Debarre not being fit to lead))
+"So he will just leave you alone?"
 
-"You're nuts," Debarre said, rubbing his paws over his face. "You're all fucking nuts."
+"He answers to his desire for power, I answer only to my desire for stability and continuity. In that I remain earnest in my conviction," she said by way of answer. "Even that of me which is End Waking and May. End Waking cannot love his forest if politics overwhelm his existence. May cannot hold onto her devotion. These things I know."
+
+May nodded slowly. "You are not wrong. I would not have used such words, but you are not wrong."
+
+"That of me which remains True Name has settled down," she continued. "And she still holds to the idea that politics is a means to an end. She is good at it. She enjoys it. She is willing and able to utilize it."
+
+"So," Debarre said slowly. "When did you realize this might even work?"
+
+"It was a chance I took. One that might have failed, yes, but a good chance. It was that comment about me and you not being fit to lead. Jonas had a view of me that was as inaccurate as it was easy to use against him. I have my political acumen and you have your own small group."
+
+Ioan watched Debarre stiffen, making note of his response. It didn't feel like the type of thing to include in the story, but it did make rather a lot of the weasel's words and actions make more sense.
+
+"You're nuts," Debarre said, rubbing his paws over his face to cover his physical response. "You're all fucking nuts."
 
 Ioan gestured wildly toward the weasel. "Confirmation! Fucking nuts!"
 
-The three skunks laughed while ey and Debarre leaned across the table to shake hands.
+The three skunks laughed while ey and Debarre leaned across the circle to shake hands.