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fiction writing/jaroudi/asoub/2.md 2;" vimwiki:writing/jaroudi/asoub/2\twriting/jaroudi/asoub/2
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fiction writing/jaroudi/asoub/3.md 2;" vimwiki:writing/jaroudi/asoub/3\twriting/jaroudi/asoub/3
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fiction writing/jaroudi/index.md 2;" vimwiki:writing/jaroudi/index\twriting/jaroudi/index
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fiction writing/middle-notes/index.md 2;" vimwiki:writing/middle-notes/index\twriting/middle-notes/index
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fiction writing/no-thoughts-our-own/index.md 2;" vimwiki:writing/no-thoughts-our-own/index\twriting/no-thoughts-our-own/index
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fiction writing/not-all-of-this-is-yours.md 2;" vimwiki:writing/not-all-of-this-is-yours\twriting/not-all-of-this-is-yours
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fiction writing/post-self/apres-un-reve.md 2;" vimwiki:writing/post-self/apres-un-reve\twriting/post-self/apres-un-reve
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writing writing/light.md 2;" vimwiki:writing/light\twriting/light
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writing writing/manifesto.md 2;" vimwiki:writing/manifesto\twriting/manifesto
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writing writing/manifesto/index.md 2;" vimwiki:writing/manifesto/index\twriting/manifesto/index
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writing writing/middle-notes/index.md 2;" vimwiki:writing/middle-notes/index\twriting/middle-notes/index
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writing writing/missives.md 2;" vimwiki:writing/missives\twriting/missives
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writing writing/new-american-absinthe.md 2;" vimwiki:writing/new-american-absinthe\twriting/new-american-absinthe
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writing writing/no-thoughts-our-own/index.md 2;" vimwiki:writing/no-thoughts-our-own/index\twriting/no-thoughts-our-own/index
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%title Middle Notes (working title)
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:writing:fiction:
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Idea: The terror of a sudden addition of a new, unknowable sense.
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Story of a blind-from-birth character in a solipsist world, only one, makes incense and lives a life of prayer, foraging and fishing. Some animal - marten, maybe? "He sat in the sun and was greatly warmed, and by this he had always surmised that his fur was of a particular quality that the sun was drawn to, for there were parts of his surroundings that rejected and repelled the sun." Spend at least a few thousand words on day to day life and small challenges.
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Conflict: a fae character (presence?) gives him sight - the narrator? "I gave him sight"? That makes the opening a series of observances.
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Target length: 30-40k words
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## Characters
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* Lyut(garde)
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* A critter analogous to a pine marten
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* Endlessly faithful
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* Prays to/meditates/becomes one with Ýng god/spirit of physicality/touch/smell
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* Apparently only sapient being on the planet, but all we see are their surroundings
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* Makes incense, lives off forage and fishing
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* Profoundly blind from birth
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* Týw
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* god/spirit of light and trickster
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## Outline
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* On Lyut's daily routine
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* On going to bed hungry and subsisting on the smoke of prayer
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* On cycles, days, sun, heat
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* Confounding with sight
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