From 8cce22078a1ca85df9c51c7a5a4017d9f09f145e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Madison Scott-Clary Date: Wed, 16 Mar 2022 22:35:07 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] update from sparkleup --- writing/post-self/neviim/remote/codrin/008.md | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/writing/post-self/neviim/remote/codrin/008.md b/writing/post-self/neviim/remote/codrin/008.md index 0a53f6f1..eca51a3f 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/neviim/remote/codrin/008.md +++ b/writing/post-self/neviim/remote/codrin/008.md @@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ Stolon tilted their head far to the side. "In over...?" Stolon stretched out long enough to grab a curly-edged leaf from one of the short bushes, picking at it between dull claws. "I also, *ka.* I am not...combination? Child? I am from before embedding. Before before, I also study. I study stars and inside planets. I also in over my head. I am knowing how convergence works, so I am here, but still I dream of stars." -"I was on my way into academia as well," Codrin said, filing the thirdracer's use of 'child' and 'combination' away for later. "But I guess my chosen interests align a bit more with politics than astronomy." +"I was on my way into academia as well," Codrin said, filing the thirdracer's use of 'child' and 'combination' away for later questioning. "But I guess my chosen interests align a bit more with politics than astronomy." "*Anem, anem.*" @@ -174,7 +174,7 @@ Stolon bobbed their head. "*Anem,* recorder Codrin Bălan. We find patterns and "I will remain-always-be Turun Ko." -There was another moment's silence as they processed and the Artemisians waited. Tycho and Stolon drifted back into quiet conversation. +There was another moment's silence as they processed and the Artemisians waited. Tycho and Stolon drifted back into quiet conversation, the secondracer plucking at another leaf or two. There was so much to take in here, but on further examination, it all made quite a bit of sense. The Artemisians had prepared for this event as thoroughly as had the Odists and Jonases. Of course there would be things that would happen --- or at least could be reasonably expected to happen --- throughout the convergence. The Artemisians simply had a head start in that they had history to lean on: they'd been through at least three convergences prior to this one.