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@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ It knelt beside them, digging up stones of its own and handing them to em. *"Of
"Oh? That makes sense, I suppose" Ey plopped a root-tangled rock on top of the growing pile, laughing. "Something exciting after all those years, back to being at the heart of something important."
Dear splayed its ears. *"It is hard to let go of that desire, yes. Many of them are quite mad now, however."*
Dear splayed its ears. *"It is hard to let go of that desire, yes. A few of them are quite mad now, however."*
"Mad how?"
@ -82,9 +82,9 @@ Dear splayed its ears. *"It is hard to let go of that desire, yes. Many of them
"Interesting good? Interesting bad?" Ey laughed. "You can't call them mad and then just leave 'interesting' hanging in there."
*"Of course I can."* It stood again, dusting off its legs. *"But I love you, so I will not. As far as I can tell, many initially picked up artistic endeavors of some sort or another, and almost to a one, they became interested in history and preservation. I am sure that you have read several of their works. Much of the strain on their personalities began to show about twenty years ago."*
*"Of course I can."* It stood again, dusting off its legs. *"But I love you, so I will not. As far as I can tell, many initially picked up artistic endeavors of some sort or another, and almost to a one, they became interested in history and preservation. I am sure that you have read several of their works. For those who experienced such, much of the strain on their personalities began to show about twenty years ago."*
"Twenty years ago, huh? Around the time of the Qoheleth stuff? Or the launch?"
"Twenty years ago, huh? Around the time of *On the Perils of Memory*? Or the launch?"
The fox only grinned.

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"When you had someone addicted to close attachments move in with you?"
"A bit before, perhaps, probably with that Qoheleth business, though I couldn't put my finger on it at the time. That's where Codrin came from, after all."
"A bit before, perhaps, probably when working on *On the Perils of Memory*, what with all that went into that Qoheleth business, though I couldn't put my finger on it at the time. That's where Codrin came from, after all."
May slipped her arm from beneath eir hand so that she could lace her fingers with eirs. "That makes sense. Do you understand it better now?"