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* Begins with a lot of learning about each other
* Shifts to gentle nudges this way and that to information sent between the two ships and between DMZ and System as a whole
* Shifts from there to gentle nudges back and forth on each others' societies
* Climax??? Maybe there is a subversive faction of both humans and aliens who figures out how to break through the DMZ on each? Or perhaps humans are invited to join the other 4 species on the ship, also expand the DMZ (can't/won't change it from one-way, but folks can send forks into it to live, communicate through perisystem border. Tickles Dear because can't merge forks back
* Climax??? Maybe there is a subversive faction of both humans and aliens who figures out how to break through the DMZ on each? Or perhaps humans are invited to join the other 4 species on the ship, also expand the DMZ (can't/won't change it from one-way, but folks can send forks into it to live, communicate through perisystem border. Codrin finally figures eir shit out so ey can make the proposal to also send forks to the DMZickles Dear because can't merge forks back
* Denouement: Who's upset? Who's happy? Why? What's next?
* Notes:
* [ ] Codrin not sure how ey feels about always being the amanuensis for everything big. Not tired, really, but frustrated?
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## Outline
* [o] Epigraph
* [o] *If you race only with foot-runners and they exhaust you, how then can you compete with horses? If you are secure only in a tranquil land, how will you fare in the jungle of the Jordan?* --- Jeremiah 12:5
* [X] Epigraph
* [X] *If you race only with foot-runners and they exhaust you, how then can you compete with horses? If you are secure only in a tranquil land, how will you fare in the jungle of the Jordan?* --- Jeremiah 12:5
* [.] Act I - leading up to the arrival of the Artemisians
* [o] [Tycho Brahe](local/tycho/001) --- Tycho seeks out Codrin to tell em what happened. - 1481
* [o] [Codrin Bălan](local/codrin/001) --- After coping ahead w/ Tycho, Codrin expresses worries with Dear - 1896
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* [o] [Codrin Bălan](local/codrin/002) --- Goes to begin the work with Tycho, explaining how projects start, amanuenses - 2643
* [ ] [Tycho Brahe](local/tycho/003) --- Tycho#Artemis catches up on recent developments (instructions for interfacing with their version of the Ansible, instructions on course change to stay in closer contact for longer), meets up with Answers Will Not Help, who is surprisingly open about news management.
* [ ] [Codrin Bălan](local/codrin/003) --- Meets But The Dead Know Nothing to talk about joining the amanuensis team, repentant, talk about what that would even look like, decide on Odist translator as Tycho will be astro translator, laughs that this is the most organized project yet
* [ ] Interlude 1 - Ioan and May discuss ramifications to history/mythos
* [ ] [Tycho Brahe](local/tycho/004) --- Tycho, True Name, Answers Will Not Help, other astronomer, and System tech fork to basically create a massive workforce to get all this done as fast as possible, .com
* [ ] [Codrin Bălan](local/codrin/004) --- Meeds up with the Artemis team, somewhat tense around True Name, but learns a bit more about the current status and how well under control it is (or how tightly controlled Odists are keeping it)
* [ ] [Interlude](interlude/001) - Ioan and May discuss news, but also Codrin's notes about feeling dragged along
* [ ] [Tycho Brahe](local/tycho/005) --- Tycho has a dream about meeting the Artemisians, wakes and talks with TN about preemptive cultural exchange so that they know more about each other, works with Why Ask Questions thinking she's Answers Will Not Help.
* [ ] [Codrin Bălan](local/codrin/005) --- Tycho, The Dead Know Nothing, have dinner with Codrin, Dear, Dear's partner, talk about jobs, what they used to do, how odd it is to have one. Tycho gets message re: culture and shares with table.
* [ ] [Tycho Brahe](local/tycho/006) --- Breakthrough means that they can indeed exchange emissaries, talks with True Name about who will actually be involved in this: him, Codrin, But The Dead Know Nothing, Why Ask Questions, TN, to be the same on both LVs (but Tycho doesn't notice the difference between WAQ and AWNH yet)
* [ ] [Codrin Bălan](local/codrin/006) --- Walk with Dear, talking about what to expect/not expect (actual understanding may take decades, some other stuff), Dear admits that this might be one it's glad to sit out, they talk about that
* [ ] [Tycho Brahe](local/tycho/007) --- They work out a date, start making preparations e.g: building the DMZ out a bit, forks for who's going, finally finds out that WAQ and AWNH are different, grumpy but keeps to himself
* [ ] Act II - exchange of emissaries, discussions, knowledge share
* [ ] Interlude 2 - Ioan and May discuss how it feels to know that the talks are taking place and may be over by the time they hear about it
* [ ] Interlude - Ioan and May discuss how it feels to know that the talks are taking place and may be over by the time they hear about it
* [ ] Act III - manipulations fail
* [ ] Interlude 3 - Ioan and May speculate
* [ ] Interlude - Ioan and May speculate on how True Name must be taking it locally/Pollux
* [ ] Conclusion - DMZ expands, several upload to Artemis
* [ ] Interlude - Ioan and May discuss ramifications on history/mythos
* [ ] Epilogue - Tycho invests fully, ceremony a la Sasha's eulogy