From 92e3a275ee28e2fcf97da3d95295898b8123b26d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Madison Scott-Clary <mscottclary@nvidia.com>
Date: Wed, 5 Jan 2022 18:55:04 -0800
Subject: [PATCH] update from sparkleup

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 writing/3/seasons/index.md | 54 ++++++++++++++++----------------------
 1 file changed, 23 insertions(+), 31 deletions(-)

diff --git a/writing/3/seasons/index.md b/writing/3/seasons/index.md
index 5e0d4d7f..998c39e6 100644
--- a/writing/3/seasons/index.md
+++ b/writing/3/seasons/index.md
@@ -11,6 +11,8 @@
 <!-- Move to footnote:
 When I studied music, back in university, back as I was starting to get into software engineering, I found the dichotomy surrounding repeatability between these two subjects self-evident. There is a special curse for software bugs that are not easily repeated: Heisenbugs[^heisenbugs]. On the other hand, though, there *is* no way to ever perform the same song twice, even for the same singers, the same instrumentalists, the same conductors. Even with the same audience, that time any time must perforce pass in so time-bound an art means that those who hear the song 
 
+[^heisenbugs]: From the Heisenberg Uncertainty Principle, which, glibly, states that observation influences measurements. A bug that you cannot reproduce when you are watching simply must share some of these attributes, but they never do.
+
 A year spirals up.
 
 A day, a week, a month, they all spiral, for any one Sunday is like the previous and the next shall be much the same, but the you who experiences the differing Sundays is different. It is a spiral, proceeding steadfastly onward. A day is a spiral, with each morning much the same as the one before and the one after. A month, following the cycle of the moon
@@ -54,7 +56,6 @@ Within her womb there grows a golden bloom.
 \parencite[26]{leaves}
 '''
 
-
 Spring is commonly associated with newness. New growth, new life, new warmth under a new sun. 
 
 ## Summer
@@ -74,15 +75,15 @@ Testing palisades of clocks and yardsticks,
 No advent waits for the restive dreamer.
 I bandage my tattered, bitten left hand
 And shed the smoke rings on my cloven finger.
-'''
 
-(Dwale, pg. 8)
+\parencite[8]{leaves}
+'''
 
 ## Autumn
 
+'''
 *Face down in the leaves*
 
-'''
 We crawl through moist humus like millipedes,
 Feasting on dirt and dead, crumbling leaves
 While striped skies cycle through violet hues,
@@ -102,23 +103,17 @@ In dreams we interred, with your pure throat bare,
 I know your breath, your jasmine-scented air.
 Alive, a god to mites and mud-daubers.
 The harvestmen scuttle and bob onwards.
+
+\parencite[9]{leaves}
 '''
 
-(Dwale, pg. 9)
-
-### The poem
-
-### Analysis and parallels
-
-### The song
-
-### In life
+<!-- RELATED -->
 
 ## Winter
 
+'''
 *Dirt Garden*
 
-'''
 My garden of foxtails and milk-thistle,
 Alive and wild, more so than tended rows
 In growth, has died. I killed them a little,
@@ -133,22 +128,14 @@ To plant their roots in my warm, earthen roof,
 Just they and I, with no need of reproof,
 And thank the thorns for making a hale fence,
 The compost for being my winter blanket.
+
+\parencite[5]{leaves}
 '''
 
-(Dwale, pg. 5)
-
-### The poem
-
-### Analysis and parallels
-
-### The song
-
-### In life
-
-## Citations
+## Works cited
 
 ```
-@book{dwale,
+@book{leaves,
     title     = "Face Down in the Leaves",
     author    = "Dwale",
     publisher = "Weasel Press",
@@ -167,7 +154,7 @@ The compost for being my winter blanket.
 @book{graves_poems,
     title     = "Collected poems, 1965",
     author    = "Robert Graves",
-    publisher = "Cassell & Company Ltd",
+    publisher = "Cassell \& Company Ltd",
     place     = "London, UK",
     year      = "1965"
 }
@@ -185,7 +172,7 @@ The compost for being my winter blanket.
 @book{issa,
     title     = "The Autumn Wind: a selection of poems by Issa",
     author    = "Issa, Kobayashi and Mackenzie, Lewis (Trans.)",
-    publisher = "John Murray (Publishers) Ltd"
+    publisher = "John Murray (Publishers) Ltd",
     place     = "London, UK",
     year      = "1957"
 }
@@ -202,7 +189,7 @@ The compost for being my winter blanket.
     title        = "Pale She",
     author       = "Scott-Clary, Madison",
     howpublished = {\url{https://writing.drab-makyo.com/poetry/pale-she/}},
-    year         = "2020",`
+    year         = "2020",
     note         = "Accessed Feb 11, 2021"
 }
 
@@ -229,8 +216,13 @@ The compost for being my winter blanket.
     howpublished = {\url{https://ericwhitacre.com/music-catalog/winter}},
     note         = "Accessed Feb 10, 2021"
 }
+
+@misc{dwale,
+    title        = "Dwale",
+    author       = "WikiFur",
+    howpublished = {\url{https://en.wikifur.com/wiki/Dwale}},
+    note         = "Accessed Nov 28, 2021"
+}
 ```
 
 ## Notes
-
-[^heisenbugs]: From the Heisenberg Uncertainty Principle, which, glibly, states that observation influences measurements. A bug that you cannot reproduce when you are watching simply must share some of these attributes, but they never do.