From 9718556fcb747e6fffc1b33f8070c266bfaa3947 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Madison Scott-Clary Date: Sun, 12 May 2024 15:02:51 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] update from sparkleup --- writing/post-self/idumea/003.md | 4 ++++ writing/post-self/idumea/index.md | 1 + 2 files changed, 5 insertions(+) diff --git a/writing/post-self/idumea/003.md b/writing/post-self/idumea/003.md index 7248738a..759209b2 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/idumea/003.md +++ b/writing/post-self/idumea/003.md @@ -66,6 +66,10 @@ She sipped her soy milk in an attempt to maintain control over herself, as somet Her therapist lowered her hand from where she had raised it. "I do not know No Hesitation as well as I might, for which I feel some regret, but In Dreams confided with In Memory, and my down-tree confided in me that she had some fears that she had offended em. Given the structure of our stanza, I think it perhaps unwise that I know too much of that particular conversation." +The Woman lingered again in silence, and her mind was aswirl with undefined thoughts that she could no longer pin down, and where once she felt alright, she began to feel something far more tentative, and where once there was a bauble of thoughts on joy, there was now some rectilinear ember, sharp-edged, that she no longer wished to behold, which she quickly dropped and stepped away from in fear and in pain. + +"Yes, Ever Dream. Of course. I will speak of other things." + ----- (the tenth stanza lingers in suffering and defines themselves by it, just as the seventh does with therapy) diff --git a/writing/post-self/idumea/index.md b/writing/post-self/idumea/index.md index 9f650477..2159f665 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/idumea/index.md +++ b/writing/post-self/idumea/index.md @@ -43,6 +43,7 @@ At the end, devolves into graphomania with: * The Woman (End Of Endings) — suffering some severe mental health stuff, wants to rescind her humanity * Her Friend (No Hesitation) — her companion striving to help her in general, accidentally helping her in particular +* Her Therapist (Ever Dream, up-tree of In Memory) — seventh stanza therapist * The Blue Fairy (Dry Grass) — helps with the forking process ## Outline