diff --git a/writing/post-self/neviim/ioan/004.md b/writing/post-self/neviim/ioan/004.md
index 6f55db2c..b4409d5b 100644
--- a/writing/post-self/neviim/ioan/004.md
+++ b/writing/post-self/neviim/ioan/004.md
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ May made it through dinner --- Ioan was heartened to see that she'd actually eat
 
 Every time ey'd left her to sleep out on the beanbag in the past, though, she'd spent the next day disoriented and moody --- ey suspected this is what she'd meant when she said she slept better next to someone all those years ago --- so once ey finished the (unnecessary but meditative) task of cleaning, ey knelt beside the beanbag, wormed eir arms beneath her, and scooped her up.
 
-May made a sort of drowsy chirping noise as ey lifted her, hugging her arms around eir shoulders for the short journey to the bedroom. Long as her tail was, ey had to be careful not to step on any of her fur with it hanging limply, almost to the ground.
+She made a sort of drowsy chirping noise as ey lifted her, hugging her arms around eir shoulders for the short journey to the bedroom. Long as her tail was, ey had to be careful not to step on any of her fur with it hanging limply, almost to the ground.
 
 Once there, ey helped her out of her clothes, unsteady as she was, and then tucked her into bed, leaning down to put a kiss on her cheek.
 
diff --git a/writing/post-self/neviim/remote/codrin/003.md b/writing/post-self/neviim/remote/codrin/003.md
index bd320ff9..8653801e 100644
--- a/writing/post-self/neviim/remote/codrin/003.md
+++ b/writing/post-self/neviim/remote/codrin/003.md
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 
 > *Convergence T-2 days, 20 hours, 37 minutes*
 
-> Codrin#Artemis
+> Codrin#Artemis,
 >
 > I am finding myself overwhelmed by the strangeness of the goings on during this whole venture. I know that you have it worse, given the fact that you are having to deal with meeting four alien races as well as experiencing an entirely new system, complete with an entirely new take on reality.
 >