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* Sefari: Whatever it is in your power to do, do with all your might,. For there is no action, no reasoning, no learning, no wisdom in Sheol, where you are going.
* [X] Conversation --- Ioan's been hanging out with TN, May is actively working on letting go, and has gotten to the point of being cordial, polite, occasionally kind
* [X]
> What lives we lead we lead in memory
The grandest contribution offered by newborn immortality is the ever-living memories of the dead. Our lives become a ceaseless eulogy.
> What lives we lead we lead in memory
The grandest contribution offered by newborn immortality is the ever-living memories of the dead. Our lives become a ceaseless eulogy.
* [X] CHAPTER Ioan 2349
* [X] [Coffee date - Nov 2349](001) --- Ioan and TN get coffee, which they've been doing about once a month or so for a few years now.
* [X] [May's monologue, Ioan's critique](002) --- May's writing a monologue, so she delivers what she has to Ioan who offers a critique. It's about her own history, so they get to talking about her past
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* [X] [Coffee date - Jan 2350 (TN's No Way 1)](008) --- Assassination attempt (actual assassination may not be until most of the way through a few thousand words after talking with May), the fact that Ioan's been meeting with TN's root instance hits home
* [X] Conflict --- After assassination attempt on TN, learn about TN getting pushed out by Jonas, May offers to merge down, turns into big discussion
* [X]
> To hone is to trade ends for perpetual perfection
The danger in ceaseless memorialization is just how close it lies to idolatry. To elevate the dead to such a status as false god (for what being that is limited to the perfection of memory is not false?) is to ceaselessly perfect the imperfectable.
> To hone is to trade ends for perpetual perfection
The danger in ceaseless memorialization is just how close it lies to idolatry. To elevate the dead to such a status as false god (for what being that is limited to the perfection of memory is not false?) is to ceaselessly perfect the imperfectable.
* [X] CHAPTER Ioan 2350
* [X] [May's No Way 2](009) --- Upset about the situation; that it's politics is bringing up a lot more bad feelings about True Name
* [X] [Clearing the house](010) --- Ioan goes to clear the house and lock down ACLs. Bounces all the assassins, meets Jonas and talks with him for a bit. He's a dick. They still decide to stay the night at the lake with some basic camping amenities, EW comes over to help, TN is elsewhere, stomping around the lake off sending messages and such (EW brings two of things, Ioan corrects to three)
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* [X] Apprehension --- EW merges down and TN has to deal; Ioan and May have to consider ramifications
* [X] CHAPTER Ioan 2350
* [X]
> For memory ends at the teeth of death.
And so the dead may live on in restless eternity, never knowing peace or the oblivion they so richly deserve. There is no peace in eternal memory, no release in unending remembering.
> For memory ends at the teeth of death.
And so the dead may live on in restless eternity, never knowing peace or the oblivion they so richly deserve. There is no peace in eternal memory, no release in unending remembering.
* [X] [Retreat: perspective](018) --- TN recovering, trying to reconcile her calling vs penance
* [X] [Retreat: memories](019) --- After talking with TN about her memories from EW about Debarre, Ioan starts to feel icky about TN having May's memory of their relationship
* [X] [TN Choose Fear](020) --- TN says she can't deal, pulls back from both May and Ioan, stays at Arrowhead lake with new camping knowledge (We learn about TN's relationship)
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* [-] MERGED ABOVE [Choose love: decision]() --- TN realizes that changing is probably the only real way out of all of this, and really? That's not so bad. Besides, maybe she has a plan, though not complete enough to share yet, they decide to go through with it
* [O] Reconciliation --- After the merge and TN's collapse, she has to process two centuries of memories while Ioan and May have to process the results of the merge
* [X]
> The living know that they will die
> but the dead know nothing.
By our very act of knowing, of remembering, of denying our own deaths, the dead are left in limbo, for every idea's opposite is the absence of that idea, and we can no longer grant them that.
> The living know that they will die
> but the dead know nothing.
By our very act of knowing, of remembering, of denying our own deaths, the dead are left in limbo, for every idea's opposite is the absence of that idea, and we can no longer grant them that.
* [X] CHAPTER Ioan 2350
* [X] [Plan and risk](029) --- they plan together on how to make this a more deliberate thing than the merger with EW, setting up a nest in which she can process comfortably, Ioan lays in supplies, TN negotiates boundaries and how they'll shift, May merges down
* [X] [Grand gesture](030) --- TN processes, cries a lot, they talk about what this means (acknowledging that talking boundaries is a new thing for TN) It goes well enough that her fork quits
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* [ ] [Epilogue](037) Ioan and Sasha are drifting closer together as hinted at in 002, but this should a) look like it's going to end happily and b) be an active and open conversation because I am completely unwilling to lose any of them.
* [ ]
> To deny the end is to deny all beginnings,
> and to deny beginnings is to become immortal,
> and to become immortal is to repeat the past.
It has been a quarter of a millenium since their death, and yet less than a quarter of a thousand people know their name. Fitting, then, that I tell you the story of the poet and the one true origin of our world, of our very own ghost in the system, of the whispers in your dreams and the one who binds us to immortality.
> To deny the end is to deny all beginnings,
> and to deny beginnings is to become immortal,
> and to become immortal is to repeat the past.
It has been a quarter of a millenium since their death, and yet less than a quarter of a thousand people know their name. Fitting, then, that I tell you the story of the poet and the one true origin of our world, of our very own ghost in the system, of the whispers in your dreams and the one who binds us to immortality.
* [Synopsis](synopsis)
* [Cover ideas](cover-ideas)