From 9a333f59d73a40f8ab6b3c08d5b392c09b924787 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Madison Scott-Clary Date: Fri, 24 Sep 2021 15:55:04 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] update from sparkleup --- writing/post-self/toledot/launch/sys/Ioan/001.md | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/writing/post-self/toledot/launch/sys/Ioan/001.md b/writing/post-self/toledot/launch/sys/Ioan/001.md index 8e32a83d..f9b3a3e4 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/toledot/launch/sys/Ioan/001.md +++ b/writing/post-self/toledot/launch/sys/Ioan/001.md @@ -151,7 +151,7 @@ Ioan and the skunk let the intoxication of the night cling to them a while longe It had taken Ioan several days to get used to the skunk's affectionate nature. When she first moved in as the intensity of the project began to ramp up, it had taken em by surprise, and ey had needed to have a series of awkward conversations discussing boundaries and intentions. -Now, as she slouched against eir side on that bench swing and ey settled eir arm around her, he asked, "What's the story behind your fork? Or your stanza?" +Now, as she slouched against eir side on that bench swing and ey settled eir arm around her, ey asked, "What's the story behind your fork? Or your stanza?" "Mm?" @@ -199,7 +199,7 @@ She shrugged noncommittally, then rested her head back on Ioan's shoulder. The a Ioan nodded. "Close enough to politics, I suppose." -Another moment of silence. The academic permitted some of the drunkenness from the evening to drift away, allowing em to think more clearly. May Then My Name relaxed further against eir side, and ey suspected she was not far away from sleep. Tomorrow, the work would begin in earnest, so ey was tempted to let her sleep, but a question nagged at him. +Another moment of silence. The academic permitted some of the drunkenness from the evening to drift away, allowing em to think more clearly. May Then My Name relaxed further against eir side, and ey suspected she was not far away from sleep. Tomorrow, the work would begin in earnest, so ey was tempted to let her sleep, but a question nagged at em. "May?"