update from sparkleup

writing/3/seasons/index.md

@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ Spring is also associated with growth. It's the time when plants race toward the
 
 And, importantly, spring is the season of expectations. The year may start on the first of January, a convenient fiction provided to us by the need to start it *somewhere*, but the expectations for the rest of the year lay dormant in the mind until spring. January first is the time to make the resolutions and the rest of winter is the time to try them out, whether tentatively or with great passion, but the setting of expectations for the year doesn't come until the trauma of the year before has settled into uneasy memory ---  or, to use an outdated metaphor, expectations are not set until one stops writing the previous year on the date line of one's checks.
 
-Although it often engaged with expectations in its work, Dwale tackles the subject of spring in the context of beginnings and growth infrequently. One small example of this comes from a short *renga* that took place on Twitter:
+Although it often engaged with expectations in its work, Dwale tackles the subject of spring in the context of beginnings and growth with less frequency. One small example of this comes from a short *renga* that took place on Twitter:
 
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