update from sparkleup

writing/post-self/neviim/interlude/000.md

@@ -128,4 +128,4 @@ RJ did not mind. What sadness that dug at em from Prisca's passing had been blun
 
 "About prophecy, I mean. Just over two years since you got back and here you are, being invited to compel the future to do your bidding using what you learned."
 
-Ey laughed, earnest and true. "I suppose so. I was going to say "the prophet is only a pipe that sounds when the past demands it", and given that I cannot seem to live in this world anymore, that demand is getting to be overwhelming."
+Ey laughed, earnest and true. "I suppose so. I was going to say 'the prophet is only a pipe that sounds when the past demands it', and given that I cannot seem to live in this world anymore, that demand is getting to be overwhelming."

writing/post-self/neviim/ioan/002.md

@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ May stood as well and stepped around the table, taking the other skunk's paws in
 
 Ioan marveled. If the sight of two skunks that shared so much in common and yet differed in such fundamental ways was uncanny, seeing them touch in like this after so much acrimonious history bordered on distressing.
 
-"You wrote to me back in 197," May said. "You pointed me toward Ioan and you told me, "You are, in many ways, a better version of me, and the completeness that you bring to our stanza ensures that we add up to something that is greater than the sum of its parts." You told me that you still love me in your own way. Do you remember that?"
+"You wrote to me back in 197," May said. "You pointed me toward Ioan and you told me, 'You are, in many ways, a better version of me, and the completeness that you bring to our stanza ensures that we add up to something that is greater than the sum of its parts.' You told me that you still love me in your own way. Do you remember that?"
 
 The skunk canted her ears back and nodded.
 

writing/post-self/neviim/ioan/006.md

@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ Once spring began to tickle at the nose and before the oppressive heat began to
 
 The skunk nodded, turning her head to the side to poke her nose against eir cheek. "I am also curious as to your thoughts on Convergence, but tell me about Codrin, first, as a Bălan."
 
-Ey laughed. "Well, alright. I think it was a pretty good one, all told. It was very...em. Bringing them together to make a formal announcement of "we're moving to convergence" is an incredibly Bălan thing to do. Still, I'm glad ey was able to manage, and I think they'll do well there. Ey certainly seems to have enjoyed eir time with the Artemisians, so I'm glad ey's going to do more than just visit with them across a border."
+Ey laughed. "Well, alright. I think it was a pretty good one, all told. It was very...em. Bringing them together to make a formal announcement of 'we're moving to convergence' is an incredibly Bălan thing to do. Still, I'm glad ey was able to manage, and I think they'll do well there. Ey certainly seems to have enjoyed eir time with the Artemisians, so I'm glad ey's going to do more than just visit with them across a border."
 
 "Really? Ey gave an actual announcement?" May giggled, giving eir hand a squeeze in her paw. "You are such fucking nerds."
 

writing/post-self/neviim/ioan/009.md

@@ -123,7 +123,7 @@ Ey shook emself from eir own rumination and back to the present. "I'm sorry?"
 
 True Name smiled. "You said that you were happy to listen to me. Your partner hates me --- let us not mince words: she hates me and I have grown to accept that as best I can. You are close, as partners should be, and you have as much reason to hate me as anyone, and yet you met me here --- asked to meet me here, even --- and say that you are happy to listen. Why?"
 
-"Oh. Well," ey began, then stalled out. Ey raced through eir memories for a reason ey could articulate. "It was something that Codrin#Castor said. Em and Dear both, actually. Codrin passed on a letter that Codrin#Artemis sent, saying that it has been difficult emotionally to watch what ey remembers from Michelle in your cocladists. When ey mentioned the time skew to it, Dear said to be watchful around your counterpart, saying, "remember what I said: even True Name has emotions, even she will be affected"."
+"Oh. Well," ey began, then stalled out. Ey raced through eir memories for a reason ey could articulate. "It was something that Codrin#Castor said. Em and Dear both, actually. Codrin passed on a letter that Codrin#Artemis sent, saying that it has been difficult emotionally to watch what ey remembers from Michelle in your cocladists. When ey mentioned the time skew to it, Dear said to be watchful around your counterpart, saying, 'remember what I said: even True Name has emotions, even she will be affected'."
 
 The skunk sat back, looking stunned, then choked out a half-laugh-half-sob, setting her mug down on the table so that she could rub her paws firmly over her face, leaving them to cover it. "Even I have emotions. Even I!" she said between deep breaths. "I know that your cocladist and Dear meant well by this, but how damning an indictment. *Even I.*"
 

writing/post-self/neviim/remote/codrin/004.md

@@ -170,7 +170,7 @@ Codrin allowed the moment to pass before continuing. "Thank you. For what occupa
 
 "I suppose activities have their own requirements for how one utilizes skew. For instance, representative Iska doubtless relies on it quite heavily. Does knowing one's interest tell you about their skew habits? Is there pressure for one to not take up an activity due to the skew habits one has already formed?"
 
-Iska was practically purring at this turn in the conversation. "Had one of us asked that question, I would have said 'no', but hearing it from you has made me think about it in a new way. I would have said that one simply would not think to take up that activity, but now that you say such, I think that this is the case. I am uncomfortable with not utilizing skew, yes, but for activities that are pinned to common time such as preparing food and performing music, there is an expectation that I would not be a good chef or musician, yes. Were I to pick up an interest in cooking, I would be looked on with a small amount of concern. One would say about me: "I hope that they do not burn the food by shifting to slow-time" or "I expect that their food will be very rushed"."
+Iska was practically purring at this turn in the conversation. "Had one of us asked that question, I would have said 'no', but hearing it from you has made me think about it in a new way. I would have said that one simply would not think to take up that activity, but now that you say such, I think that this is the case. I am uncomfortable with not utilizing skew, yes, but for activities that are pinned to common time such as preparing food and performing music, there is an expectation that I would not be a good chef or musician, yes. Were I to pick up an interest in cooking, I would be looked on with a small amount of concern. One would say about me: 'I hope that they do not burn the food by shifting to slow-time' or 'I expect that their food will be very rushed'."
 
 Codrin grinned as ey took down notes of the answer. "One of my romantic partners, as an instance artist, has stated that it can't understand what a life without profligate forking would look like, but has never said that it feels as though it is not able to take part in another profession. That said, there are several interests or professions that one would not expect taskers or even trackers to go into. Many would sneer at a tasker trying to go into instance artistry. Does the same apply here? Are there more interests or professions that are out of reach for those who do not use skew than for those who use skew often?"