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@@ -152,7 +152,7 @@ May held out a paw once more, and this time True Name took it, letting herself b
 
 "Rest, my dear. It is okay," May said quietly. "Do you want company?"
 
-After a moment's silence, she shook her head. "No, I will...be fine. We will speak later."
+"Could themself have peeped --- And seen my Brain --- go round ---" After a shuddering breath, she shook her head. "I will...be fine. We will speak later."
 
 May nodded and crawled back over to where Ioan, nudging em to lay down so that she could tuck in against eir front. She remained tense, and when ey sent a gentle sensorium ping, she simply shook her head.