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@ -7,13 +7,6 @@ Story of a blind-from-birth character in a solipsist world, only one, makes ince
Conflict: a fae character (presence?) gives him sight - the narrator? "I gave him sight"? That makes the opening a series of observances.
## Notes
* Ýng is nonbinary, They/Their. NB: go back and capitalize.
* Fix tenses, they're all over the place
* More scent, more tactility - whiskers etc
* More detail later on, since there's so much early on. Describe seed cakes, describe the light and how confusing it is, describe how childlike he feels
## Characters
* Lyut(garde)