From b5a8676b27ca8332a3d7d0a6c12b0fe4195668ce Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Madison Scott-Clary Date: Sun, 11 Feb 2024 10:45:04 -0800 Subject: [PATCH] update from sparkleup --- writing/post-self/pinocchio/index.md | 6 ++++++ 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+) diff --git a/writing/post-self/pinocchio/index.md b/writing/post-self/pinocchio/index.md index 89a20089..d9ab158f 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/pinocchio/index.md +++ b/writing/post-self/pinocchio/index.md @@ -1,3 +1,9 @@ +%title Idumea + +Pinocchio escapes Samsara by giving up humanity. Except Pinocchio is a tenth stanza Odist and Geppetto is a seventh stanza Odist and the blue fairy is Dry Grass. + +## Notes + A version of Pinocchio told sys-side in reverse: someone unhappy with humanity endeavoring to lose it, goes through all the plot-beats in reverse order. Question: how heavy-handed should it be? Should it be very little? Someone naming themselves Occhioni P.? Trying to turn themselves into a literal puppet? Designing sims to include the big fish? Finding their Geppetto (G from Oteppe, Belgium) who unmakes them, and then a blue fairy, a sympathetic systech kicks them into quitting? Or they turn into a tree? Told as a fairy tale? Quote the first lines of the original?