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@@ -26,3 +26,5 @@ Prophet aspect: Aliens have been at this longer, start giving advice, etc, which
     * Begins with a lot of learning about each other
     * Shifts to gentle nudges this way and that to information sent between the two ships and between DMZ and System as a whole
     * Shifts from there to gentle nudges back and forth on each others' societies
+    * Climax??? Maybe there is a subversive faction of both humans and aliens who figures out how to break through the DMZ on each?
+    * Denouement? Who's upset? Who's happy? Why