diff --git a/writing/post-self/what-right-have-I/001.md b/writing/post-self/what-right-have-I/001.md index d878aac6..5853c81c 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/what-right-have-I/001.md +++ b/writing/post-self/what-right-have-I/001.md @@ -56,5 +56,5 @@ Instead, I feel fear of myself, of so many intrusive thoughts. *"Baruch ata Adonai Eloheinu, melekh ha'olam, hagomel lahayavim tovot, sheg'molani kol tov,"* I call out. -The response comes from only a quarter of the assembled — a mumbled, *"Amen. Mi sheg'malcha kol tov, hu yigmolchem kol tov selah,"* that I cannot help but sound out in my head in time — but it is enough to show that I am not speaking solely to politicians and bureaucrats (or whatever passes for such, sys-side) +The response comes from only a quarter of the assembled — a mumbled, *"Amen. Mi sheg'malcha kol tov, hu yigmolchem kol tov selah,"* that I cannot help but sound out in my head in time — but it is enough to show that I am not speaking solely to politicians and bureaucrats (or whatever passes for such, sys-side). diff --git a/writing/post-self/what-right-have-I/index.md b/writing/post-self/what-right-have-I/index.md index 59bbd138..ff63dce9 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/what-right-have-I/index.md +++ b/writing/post-self/what-right-have-I/index.md @@ -23,10 +23,12 @@ Climax: WRHI confronts RFW about feeling gaslit about being crazy, but also come What Right Have I deals with *HaShichzur* following "Prophecies". -## Starting out with... +## Outline [first pass](first-pass) -## Outline - * [001](001) — The first anniversary of the restoration, What Right Have I anxious on stage, listens to RFW give introduction, after which WRHI says Hagomel and introduces *Yom HaShichzur*. RFW catches her on the way back to her office to tell her she has been tasked with outreach to older clades specifically *because* she is the way she is + +## Notes + +* *Am Yisrael* = the Jewish people who are the nation of Israel. *Medinat Israel*, the modern state, lost cohesion in the mid 21st century, and is no longer recognizable