update from sparkleup

2020-04-08-qoheleth.wiki

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 The basic structure is in two threads: the plot from Qoheleth intertwined with the plot from Exocortices, with the shared theme of memory and forgetting. Dear can't forget RJ, RJ can't forget information while lost. The lost lead to tech required for uploading.
 
-Also includes short stories: Apres un reve, Gallery Exhibition. More? The poem?
-
 Includes appendix about both threads.
 
 = Cast =
@@ -88,12 +86,6 @@ Plot 2:
         * Qoheleth assassinated
 * Epilogue
     * We learn that the Name is RJ and that Sasha is Michel Hadje
-* Stories
-    * Apres un reve
-    * Gallery Exhibition
-    * The Ode
-* Afterword
-    * Appendix
 
 = Todo =
 
@@ -150,14 +142,14 @@ Check when edited
     * [O] Sasha 002 --- things are moving quickly
     * [O] RJ 013 --- struggling with numbness, trying to learn to manipulate the dream, memories.
     * [O] Carter 008 --- At work, viewing everyone with suspicion, DDR votes changing
-    * [.] *In progress* Carter 009 --- Carter calls out, Prakash warns, threatened by mooks
-    * [ ] *TODO*
+    * [.] In progress Carter 009 --- Carter calls out, Prakash warns, threatened by mooks
+    * [ ] TODO
         * [ ] Ioan/Qoheleth: story before gathering of Odists, perhaps a flashback to/story from Dear about forming the clade?
         * [ ] RJ: Going a bit nuts, language creeping in from the shadows, deducing what happened to Cicero, emself
         * [ ] Sasha: gets lost while working with Carter and Debarre. As seen from the inside gives Carter hint to use mirror rig
         * [ ] Carter: decides to go after RJ, helped by Caitlin, emails Avery and Prakash
 3. [o] Ketuvim
-    * [ ] *TODO*
+    * [ ] TODO
         * [ ] RJ: going crazy, bending world to eir whim.
         * [ ] Carter: makes it to RJ, gets mirror rig in place, gets attacked, Caitlin fights mooks while Carter dives in.
         * [ ] RJ: Surprised to see Carter there, resists leaving as the sudden aspect of something not being in control is a shock
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     * [o] Qoheleth 006 --- Assassinated
     * [o] Ioan 010 --- Wrapping up with Dear, Serene, Praiseworthy
 4. [o] Havel Havalim
-    * [.] *TODO* Carter --- retrospective: Sanders in jail, Prakash back to RB working on upload tech using info about exo mirroring, Carter praised for saving the lost and exposing plot
-    * [o] *TODO* RJ --- Ode in letter/suicide note to Sasha
-    * [o] Ioan 011 --- Ioan merges, begins to write, (*TODO* sends Dear a sensorium message on a whim asking if ey might send a long-lived fork to stay with em to write. Codrin Balan, perhaps? From Romanian codru, 'woods'. Maybe asks Dear how this works.)
-    * [.] *TODO* Sasha --- Sasha at/after funeral, learn she's Michel Hadje
-    * [.] *TODO* Qian Guowei --- Gets next assignment
+    * [.]  Carter --- retrospective: Sanders in jail, Prakash back to RB working on upload tech using info about exo mirroring, Carter praised for saving the lost and exposing plot
+    * [o]  RJ --- Ode in letter/suicide note to Sasha
+    * [o] Ioan 011 --- Ioan merges, begins to write, (** sends Dear a sensorium message on a whim asking if ey might send a long-lived fork to stay with em to write. Codrin Balan, perhaps? From Romanian codru, 'woods'. Maybe asks Dear how this works.)
+    * [.]  Sasha --- Sasha at/after funeral, learn she's Michel Hadje
+    * [.]  Qian Guowei --- Gets next assignment

2020-04-08-restless_town.wiki

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 %date 2020-04-08 19:20
 :writing:furry:book:fiction:
 
-In which ten Sawtooth stories become a book
+In which ten Sawtooth stories become a book.
 
 == Tasks ==
 

2020-04-08-writing.wiki

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 %date 2020-04-08 16:06
 :writing:category:
 
-Wherein Maddy cannot help her graphomania
+In which Maddy cannot help her graphomania.
 
 == Notes ==
 

index.wiki

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 %title Zettelkasten
 
-Or: Maddy Gets a Knowledge Base
+In which Maddy Gets a Knowledge Base.
 
 == Rough categories ==