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@@ -18,4 +18,6 @@ When The Woman overflows, she becomes ever more herself. She is — friends, you
 
 My astute readers will surely have picked up by now that I am riding that edge here, in these words.
 
-But, ah! This story is not about me. I am not quite overflowing yet, and The Woman most certainly is not. 
+But, ah! This story is not about me. I am not quite overflowing yet, and The Woman most certainly is not. She is revelling in the warmth of sunlight and the dance of bees and the tickling of dandelions against her ankles and the purringly soft touch of friendship.
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