diff --git a/writing/post-self/toledot/index.md b/writing/post-self/toledot/index.md index 38376656..b42d755e 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/toledot/index.md +++ b/writing/post-self/toledot/index.md @@ -70,13 +70,13 @@ The secession of the system and launch of the extra-solar system. # Outline -* [o] Epigraph - * [o] *Esau said, "I am about to die; of what use is a birthright to me?" / Jacob said, "Swear to me first." / So he swore to him, and sold his birthright to Jacob.* +* [X] Epigraph + * [X] *Esau said, "I am about to die; of what use is a birthright to me?" / Jacob said, "Swear to me first." / So he swore to him, and sold his birthright to Jacob.* * [o] Act I - * [o] [Launch: sys-side](launch/sys/001) - A death-day celebration - * [o] [Launch: sys-side](launch/sys/002) - Expanding scope - * [o] [Launch: phys-side](launch/phys/Douglas/001) - Douglas feels a feel while working on the launch - * [o] [Launch: phys-side](launch/phys/Douglas/002) - Douglas and May write to each other about the launch + * [o] [Launch: sys-side](launch/sys/001) - A death-day celebration - 2141 + * [o] [Launch: sys-side](launch/sys/002) - Expanding scope - 1351 + * [o] [Launch: phys-side](launch/phys/Douglas/001) - Douglas feels a feel while working on the launch - 1021 + * [o] [Launch: phys-side](launch/phys/Douglas/002) - Douglas and May write to each other about the launch - 2722 * [ ] Act II * [ ] Act III * [ ] Conclusion @@ -84,3 +84,5 @@ The secession of the system and launch of the extra-solar system. # Notes * The ships (identical) are similar to from *Accelerando* combined with a scissors mechanism a la Ilium and a rail gun. There's a small version of the System (plenty of room for folks to fork, etc), an RTG for power, some external physical manipulators and materials (like 1-2 tons) for repair along the way if needed, a few attitude jets, and a light sail once it's launched on each. Thin scaffold type thing about 10k kilometers long spun around the middle. In the scaffold is a rail gun to assist in propulsion as the ships are flung out into space by angular momentum, each in opposite directions. +* The launch process is the first time the sys-side and phys-side have worked together in any notable capacity since secession. +* Release should take the form of an ARG similar to the original Qoheleth.