diff --git a/writing/post-self/marsh/index.md b/writing/post-self/marsh/index.md index e9d7d059..48499bf7 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/marsh/index.md +++ b/writing/post-self/marsh/index.md @@ -28,11 +28,12 @@ NB: It's frankly astonishing how few cats there are in this story. Fix that. * [o] [002](002) --- Reed tries to merge down, but then it all kicks off --- 6269 * [o] [003](003) --- Dealing with the emotional fallout of Marsh being gone, starting later that night when Reed catches up with Vos, deals with his own grief --- 1771 * [o] [004](004) --- Meeting up with other Marshans (minus Lily, plus Dry Grass) to talk through results, walking sims and seeing how others are reacting, meeting with Odists to estimate percentages, catching Lily up --- 10190 - * [o] [005](005) --- The perisystem feeds: tallying up the missing, building up percentage of lost personalities, the Marshans and Dry Grass wind up leading an effort --- 1975 + * [o] [005](005) --- INTERLUDE: The perisystem feeds: tallying up the missing, building up percentage of lost personalities, the Marshans and Dry Grass wind up leading an effort --- 1975 * [o] [006](006) --- Dinner with Reed, Hanne, friends (Warmth, My, Jess, Dry Grass), the Marshans, Lily sort of reconciles with Dry Grass, conversation 1 about what it means to be a clade without a root instance. --- 4379 * [o] Part 2 --- Phys-side is being a little sketchy about what happened, turns out there was a reset and a lot of work behind the scenes after a coordinated attack between phys- and sys-side, taking the form of a generalized weapon that wiped out most of the System. Large chunks of it were restored after a lot of work and help from the Artemisians, but not total success --- virus loophole was fixed (incl singular attacks), but no guarantee there won't be another work-around, plans to split the System into smaller pieces, move some of them to Earth/Sun Lagrange points * [o] [007](007) --- Dry Grass loops Reed & co into discussion with phys-side admin and engineers, Günay made point and admin pushed to the side, Huddle to talk about why they're being so cagey --- 5747 * [o] [008](008) --- Dinner and talking with Dry Grass, Cress, and Tule about feelings, Reed catching feelings --- 3324 + * [ ] INTERLUDE: Millwright * [-] 009 --- (MERGED DOWN) * [o] [010](010) --- Clade representatives form a group, contact chill phys-side systech, learning even more about both what happened WRT CPV bomb and collectives, plus how phys-side is seeing things, various changes to the System, AWNH and Jonas Fa are into knife play --- 5877 * [o] [011](011) --- Meeting with member of The System Consortium, who is a member of a conservative collective, learning more about why the System was bombed --- 2346 @@ -42,6 +43,7 @@ NB: It's frankly astonishing how few cats there are in this story. Fix that. * [o] [014](014) --- Reed and Hanne talking, Reed admits to starting to grieve now that things are calming down, expresses doubts about reconstruction --- 1775 * [o] [015](015) --- Date with Dry Grass, talking about reconstruction --- 2002 * [o] [016](016) --- Discussing social changes both phys- and sys-side, improvements on the table, someone digging into Artemisian archives, Reed decides to go through with cross-tree merge --- 3975 + * [o] INTERLUDE: Nasturtiums * [o] [017](017) --- It doesn't work, there is only them, no Marsh, Vos gets *very mad*, clade admits it's time to start grieving proper --- 3619 * [o] Epilogue --- Life after * [o] [018](018) --- (~8 months later, a letter from Marsh#Castor or #Pollux expressing grief, coming to terms with letting go of the past, conversation 2 with A Finger Pointing (and other Odists) about being a clade without a root) diff --git a/writing/post-self/motes/index.md b/writing/post-self/motes/index.md index 7992c720..53581c58 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/motes/index.md +++ b/writing/post-self/motes/index.md @@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ Story about Hammered Silver losing her shit and cutting out the fifth stanza for * [o] [B: Sasha speaks](002) --- Motes gets fucked (and fucked up); talks with Sasha about what happened. * [o] [C: Warmth speaks](003) --- Visiting Warmth and Rye; The Warmth/Motes Dynamic™; discussing the nature of being an outcast (viz both Dear being a shit as well as Hammered Silver cutting off part of the ninth). * [o] [D: Slow Hours speaks](004) --- Motes has a nightmare; Motes joins Beholden and A Finger Pointing to calm down; talks with Slow Hours about dreams. -* [.] [E: A letter from Hammered Silver](005) --- The letter; going for a walk as big Motes; staying that way for a week; pulled aside by Beholden to talk about it; A Finger Pointing is out for Some Reason; talking with Sarah. +* [o] [E: A letter from Hammered Silver](005) --- The letter; going for a walk as big Motes; staying that way for a week; pulled aside by Beholden to talk about it; A Finger Pointing is out for Some Reason; talking with Sarah. * [o] [D': Flashback to the past](006) --- The origins of Motes told; some anecdotes (including Slow Hours's prophecy). * [ ] [C': A Finger Pointing and Hammered Silver](007) --- A Finger Pointing gets a letter, too; discussing what to do about it; risk assessment with Waking World and Sasha; message to Hammered Silver. * [ ] [B': Hunting for a new way forward](008) --- Big Motes tries going small, overflows; is coaxed back to Big Motes to bring her out of it; Big Motes getting back into play; talking with Sarah.