From c5ec019f99e00c14a35ede428887153e6448e4a1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Madison Scott-Clary Date: Sat, 9 Jul 2022 08:45:07 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] update from sparkleup --- writing/post-self/mitzvot/035.md | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/writing/post-self/mitzvot/035.md b/writing/post-self/mitzvot/035.md index dc482e6a..154654a1 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/mitzvot/035.md +++ b/writing/post-self/mitzvot/035.md @@ -136,7 +136,7 @@ Jonas laughed, "Just shut up, Zacharias." "No," the fox growled, his whiskers all abristle and claws digging at the tabletop. "I played my role, but that does not mean that I am some disposable nothing, here. A role is as much the actor as it is-- *stop!*" -There was a loud thump beneath the table, though this time, Zacharias appeared to have pulled his foot away in time to keep is toes from being stamped on, as he instead pushed himself away from the table and to his feet. A brief flicker of something akin to rage flashed across Jonas's face, but was quickly replaced by that bright, friendly grin. +There was a loud thump beneath the table, though this time, Zacharias appeared to have pulled his foot away in time to keep is toes from being stomped on, as he instead pushed himself away from the table and to his feet. A brief flicker of something akin to rage flashed across Jonas's face, but was quickly replaced by that bright, friendly grin. "Fine, fuck you too, then." @@ -164,7 +164,7 @@ He laughed, shooting his cuffs. "Well, if *that's* all you want, then we could h May's expression remained calm, but ey could feel the tension in her paw increase, and beyond her, ey could see End Waking bare his teeth. Even the Odists on Jonas's side the of the table flinched. None of them looked pleased. Even Why Ask Questions, jovial as she usually was, seemed to be gritting her teeth. -*He doesn't know, does he?* ey wondered. If ever there was a way to keep a group of Odists in check, that might just be it. +*Wait, does* he *know?* ey wondered. If ever there was a way to keep a group of Odists in check, that might just be it. Only True Name, of all of them, remained calm. Serious, yes, but calm. @@ -188,7 +188,7 @@ She shook her head, but whether at his words or his audacity, ey couldn't tell. Jonas raised his eyebrows at the shifts in expression and voice. The frowns around the table on the faces of the other Odists only deepened. -"How can I even begin to trust you on that? You merged your two cronies, so what? You going to go cuddle-camping with Zacharias or something?" +"How can I even begin to trust you on that? You merged your two cronies, so what? You going to go cuddle-camping with Zacharias or something? You're still you." Both May and End Waking bristled at this, but neither spoke. @@ -198,7 +198,7 @@ Both May and End Waking bristled at this, but neither spoke. "You...what, want me to look different? Sound different?" -"You need to go away, True Name. I don't fucking care how." +"You need to go away, True Name. I don't fucking care how. You make it happen or I will." There was a moment's thoughtful silence from the skunk before she stood, pushed her chair back in, and turned away from the table.