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 ## Codrin Bălan#Pollux --- The Bălan clade
+
+> systime 231 (2354)
+> (transmission delays)
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 3. [.] Recapitulation
     1. [o] [Sorina → clade](015): apology to Codrin, short, but promises more
     2. [o] [Codrin#Pollux → Ioan + May](016): talking w/ partner re them moving on
-    3. [ ] [Codrin#Castor → clade](017): to Sorina on moving on, tell us about yourself (nevermind Artemis, just you)
+    3. [o] [Codrin#Castor → clade](017): to Sorina on moving on, tell us about yourself (nevermind Artemis, just you)
     4. [ ] [Ioan → Codrin#Pollux and Sorina?](018): May on immortality vs. relationships.
     5. [ ] [Sorina → clade](019): finding her way back into being comfortably solitary, wants to hold off on A/V communication with Castor until she has things a bit more sorted with her emotions.
-    6. [ ] [Codrin#Pollux → clade](020): moving on w/o partner, w/ Serene, attached video message showing A/V working between systems, just a huge delay and limited bandwidth.
+    6. [ ] [Codrin#Pollux → clade](020): moving on w/o partner, w/ Serene, attached image showing A/V working between systems, just a huge delay and limited bandwidth, Serene and Dear are collaborating
     7. [.] [Aurel and Ioan → clade](021): updates re: the clade fading to comfortable obscurity (doubtless TN's stanza is still active, perhaps others strive, but just folk now), Sasha back to striped skunk now that TN's relevance is fading, Aurel in and out of existence, passes on Sasha's work, incl redacted version for Dear, will publish on 250th anniversary of System founding to give other Odists time to prep for the Name. Rareș died phys-side, became writer, one book dedicated 'To Ioan'.