update from sparkleup

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Madison Scott-Clary 2020-11-30 21:55:03 -08:00
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@ -98,6 +98,15 @@ Zita nods and moves to help Lyut gather his food before realizing that he can se
After the food is put away, both fishers kneel together and begin to pray aloud to Ýng.
(she rejoices, and lyut finally starts coming around)
'''
They who make the world,
They who end it,
They who bring the thunder,
In Tsuari which fell...
'''
(They pray, Tyw sends lyut to the village)
I let them finish their prayer and bask in the jubilant way that Zita's voice rings out to her lord.
When the finish, Zita smiles to Lyut and stands once more. "I must go down to the village and tell them of this miracle. Tonight you will see the moon, holy one, and know its beauty and that will be your praise to Týw."
The thought fills me with joy.

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@ -36,5 +36,4 @@ Conflict: a fae character (presence?) gives him sight - the narrator? "I gave hi
* [Týw makes a move](seeing)
* [Lyut learns to see](learning)
* [Zita finds out](discovered)
* [The village in turmoil](turmoil)
* [Týw's punishment is being seen and praised openly](punishment)