diff --git a/writing/post-self/qoheleth/RJ/013.md b/writing/post-self/qoheleth/RJ/013.md index 1beec33f..9a0e1173 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/qoheleth/RJ/013.md +++ b/writing/post-self/qoheleth/RJ/013.md @@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ Could one dream within a dream? Do so with such a detail that ey would not notic A supplication. A mantra against hopelessness. -Ey turned the knob and stepped out into the shortgrass prairie of the open space. The packed dirt of the trail welcomed eir paws. The scent of dust and rattle-dry stalks of grass washed over em. Warm, yellow lighted hemmed em in through the fog of war. +Ey turned the knob and stepped out into the shortgrass prairie of the open space. The packed dirt of the trail welcomed eir paws. The scent of dust and rattle-dry stalks of grass washed over em. Warm, yellow light hemmed em in through the fog of war. "Wait," ey said once more. Kept eir hands at eir sides. Loose. Relaxed. No menu to reach for, no gesture required.