update from sparkleup

writing/post-self/toledot/launch/sys/Ioan/011.md

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-# Ioan Balan --- 2326
+# Ioan Bălan --- 2326
 
 "We're nearing the point of this project where we're considering pulling together all of our notes. We have quite a bit already, certainly enough for an overview, and if we decide to do a second volume as a deeper dive, we can consider that later." Ioan smiled to the skunk across the table from em, one ey had so many reasons to fear. "So this interview is mostly meant to wrap everything up, fill in a few gaps here and there. Does that sound alright?"
 
@@ -8,11 +8,11 @@ Ioan collected eir thoughts for a moment, testing eir pen's nib against the pape
 
 "I am assuming you mean in more detail than just us and the Jonas clade, yes?" She tilted her head when Ioan nodded, apparently considering the best way to answer. "I, like Jonas Prime was for his clade, acted as the point of contact for the Ode clade, plus a few Jonases. However, Jonas's methods tended toward that of a hydra. He coordinated with all of his instances working on various aspects only as much as was required to keep them from stepping on each other's toes.
 
-"I, however, was much closer to the central nervous system for the Odists. The Balan clade has interviewed Why Ask Questions, End Waking, and May Then My Name, but the entirety of my stanza was working for me at one point or another--"
+"I, however, was much more akin to the central nervous system for the Odists. The Bălan clade has interviewed Why Ask Questions, End Waking, and May Then My Name, but the entirety of my stanza was working for me at one point or another--"
 
 "May is in your stanza," Ioan said, frowning.
 
-True Name winked, then continued, "But there were several others from other stanzas, as well. Praiseworthy and Qoheleth, yes, but many of the first lines and several of their initial forks helped out quite a bit. Even Hammered Silver, in her own way, helped. She kept Michelle company, helped her out through out the long years, They grew quite close, and through her, I was able to accomplish what I needed through Michelle."
+True Name winked, then continued, "But there were several others from other stanzas, as well. Praiseworthy and Qoheleth, yes, but many of the first lines and several of their initial forks helped out quite a bit. Even Hammered Silver, in her own way, helped. She kept Michelle company, helped her out through the long years, They grew quite close, and through her, I was able to accomplish what I needed through Michelle."
 
 "Is that the difference between the liberal and conservative elements of the clade?"
 
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ Ey prowled through the exo ey had devoted to this project, rifling through files
 
 Ioan scribbled furiously to keep up, as the skunk's language flowed more easily and became more flowery.
 
-"But this is just speculation, Mx Balan. We do not know why we differ so much, but we do, and that is the best guess we have. The evidence you have just seen is all we have to back it up, but you have seen what was born from it. All of the stanzas have their role, and mine just happens to be that of political machinations. We influence people. It is just what we do."
+"But this is just speculation, Mx Bălan. We do not know why we differ so much, but we do, and that is the best guess we have. The evidence you have just seen is all we have to back it up, but you have seen what was born from it. All of the stanzas have their role, and mine just happens to be that of political machinations. We influence people. It is just what we do."
 
 "Which is why your stanza was able to dive so easily into their associated tasks. They had your memories, of course, but they also had that same drive."