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 %title On Music
 
+[TOC]
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+In which Maddy had strange thoughts on music. Still does, but not quite so forcefully.
+
 ## Outline
 
 * Intro
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 ## Notes
 
+<details>
+<summary>Notes</summary>
+<pre>
 * Rehearsal Techniques
 * concert - work is done - this is payoff
 * knowing how to work
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     * empathy with singers - lots of work for them
 * q: why aren't you singing what I want? a: why aren't you showing what you want?
 * preachers on the pulpit in our influence (???)
+</pre>
+</details>
 
 ## Essay