From d1aa5641b8f778cc8da094ae8696b54bfffe89e1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Madison Scott-Clary Date: Wed, 20 Jul 2022 20:30:07 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] update from sparkleup --- writing/post-self/mitzvot/009.md | 24 ++++++++++++------------ writing/post-self/mitzvot/010.md | 2 +- 2 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-) diff --git a/writing/post-self/mitzvot/009.md b/writing/post-self/mitzvot/009.md index 29347c8d..56157079 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/mitzvot/009.md +++ b/writing/post-self/mitzvot/009.md @@ -1,10 +1,10 @@ # Ioan Bălan --- 2350 -True Name, having gathered her wits about her at least enough to trudge out of the lake and fork herself dry, requested directions to somewhere she could think alone. Ioan directed her down the path toward the rock, explaining that it'd be far enough away that they wouldn't hear each other if she didn't want a cone of silence, but that she'd still be able to see them at the entry point if anything happened. +True Name, having gathered her wits about her at least enough to trudge out of the lake and fork herself dry, requested directions to somewhere she could think alone. Ioan gestured down the path toward the rock, explaining that it'd be far enough away that they wouldn't hear each other if she didn't want a cone of silence, but that she'd still be able to see them at the entry point if anything happened. -"I need to think. No one from the stanza is replying, and I do not want to speak to Jonas," she explained, then rubbed her paws over her face. "Or perhaps I just need to sulk. I will return in an hour." +"I need to think. No one from the stanza is replying, I am not sure which friends I can trust, and I definitely do not want to speak to Jonas," she explained, then rubbed her paws over her face. "Or perhaps I just need to sulk. I will return in an hour." -She bowed to em and May then trudged off down the path, head bowed. +She bowed to em and May then trudged off down the path. May glared after her down-tree instance with her paws bunched into fists and ears splayed, then whirled on Ioan, waving a cone of silence into being. @@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ Ey took a long breath, scrubbed eir hands over eir face, and paced in an abbrevi "I spend two hundred fucking years trying to get away from that life, from all of her fucking schemes," she said, voice quickly rising in volume. "And then I spend the last three trying to calm down so that I quit burning up whenever I so much as think about her, and now this. Look at us! Hiding in the woods from assassins. *Assassins!*" -Ey averted eir gaze from her. Nothing ey could say would help, and ey knew ey knew some remote part of emself was feeling much of what she was, too. +Ey averted eir gaze from her. Nothing ey could say would help, and ey knew some remote part of emself was feeling much of what she was, too. "Her and fucking Jonas are still doing whatever the fuck it is that they do, and now they are doing it to each other. Every time I think I can just settle down with you and get away from that, it just seeps right back in. I know that you were trying to do right by us, meeting up with her, but I really, *really* wish you had not." @@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ Ey averted eir gaze from her. Nothing ey could say would help, and ey knew ey kn "At least tell me what happened there." -"Right. We met up as usual. She was looking pretty terrible, and when pressed on it, she said she was struggling and wasn't comfortable elaborating. When asked about Secession day, she said she and Jonas were going to have, in his words, a gathering. She said her instances were going to merge down for this and that one of them said he was looking for her. She kept getting anxious and looking around at everyone there, and then jumped up, I guess when merges stopped coming. Guōweī came in from the back and walked right toward us, then we stepped home and grabbed you." +"Right. We met up as usual. She was looking pretty terrible, and when pressed on it, she said she was struggling and wasn't comfortable elaborating. When asked about Secession Day, she said she and Jonas were going to have, in his words, a gathering. She said her instances were going to merge down for this and that one of them said he was looking for her. She kept getting anxious and looking around at everyone there, and then jumped up, I guess when merges stopped coming. Guōweī came in from the back and walked right toward us, then we stepped home and grabbed you." May crossed her arms and watched em pace and talk, her expression softening, though the frown remained. "And that is it? No talk of these...what, reactionary groups?" @@ -36,11 +36,11 @@ Ey shook eir head. "None today, none in the past. It seems like something she'd Ey nodded. -The skunk looked down to the ground, brow furrowed. "I suppose if he knew she was there, that would be proof enough. I imagine a place like there chooses to display it as blurred out rather than completely hidden." +The skunk looked down to the ground, brow furrowed. "I suppose if he knew she was there, that would be proof enough. I imagine a place like that chooses to display it as blurred out rather than completely hidden." "I guess," ey said, though the words lacked conviction to eir ears. "Then she grabbed my hand and told me to go." -"She grabbed--" She hesitated, mastered a sudden swell of anger, then subsided. "It makes sense, I suppose. The chance that you would head some place she and Jonas could not guess is greater than if she had chosen. Ioan, my dear, you are pacing a hole in the path." +"She grabbed--" She hesitated, mastered a sudden swell of anger, then subsided. "It makes sense, I suppose. The chance that you would head some place that she and Jonas could not guess is greater than if she had chosen. Ioan, my dear, you are pacing a hole in the path." "Sorry, May," ey said, trying to stand still. "It's just a little nuts." @@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ Remembering their promise to stay in sight, they walked slowly back and forth al "You're fine, May, you just had some guy chasing you around our house trying to kill you or whatever, you're allowed to be pissed." -She snorted and shook her head. "He had only just arrived less than a minute before you. I imagine True Name's fork said something about being with you but not where, so they came to our place and saw someone that looked vaguely like her. I am surprised they did not just wait for her. How eager they must be. Perhaps they wanted it to be as close to simultaneous as possible for precisely this reason and one simply jumped the gun." +She snorted and shook her head. "He had only just arrived a few moments before you. I imagine True Name's fork said something about being with you but not where, so they came to our place and saw someone that looked vaguely like her. I am surprised they did not just wait for her. How eager they must be. Perhaps they wanted it to be as close to simultaneous as possible for precisely this reason and one simply jumped the gun." "Makes about as much sense as any of this." Ey looked out across the lake at where the other skunk sat, head bowed. "What do we do now?" @@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ She waved the idea away with a paw. "If it is an issue, we will discuss it. If i She leaned against eir side, resting her head on eir shoulder. "I am sorry, my dear. It is one of those things that is not a concern until it suddenly very fucking is." -Ey ruffled a hand between the skunk's ears, the settled eir arm around her shoulders. "I'll tell you what all I find there, and we can both hope it's nothing. What will you do, meanwhile?" +Ey ruffled a hand through the fur between the skunk's ears, the settled eir arm around her shoulders. "I'll tell you what all I find there, and we can both hope it's nothing. What will you do, meanwhile?" "I am not sure. I do not particularly want to come with if they are looking for someone who looks like me. I will stay here and I guess keep an eye on our...ah, guest." @@ -80,11 +80,11 @@ Ey ruffled a hand between the skunk's ears, the settled eir arm around her shoul There was a long pause before the skunk gave in and slipped both of her arms around eir middle, burying her face against eir shirt. "I do not know," she said, voice muffled and small. "I thought that I would be, was going to *say* that I would be, but I really do not know." -Ey rested eir chin atop her head. "Well, I don't think I'll be gone all that long, five minutes, tops, but if you need, just send a ping and I'll be right back." +Ey rested eir chin atop her head. "Well, I don't think I'll be gone all that long --- five minutes, maybe --- but if you need, just send a ping and I'll be right back." -"I am not expecting anything so dramatic, my dear. I will stay here and try to de-stress. True Name still has about half an hour left of...well, whatever it is that she is doing." +"I am not expecting anything so dramatic. I will stay here and try to de-stress. True Name still has about half an hour left of...well, whatever it is that she is doing." -Ey tightened eir arms around the skunk for a squeeze, kissed her atop the head,then stepped back. "All the same, just stay safe, alright?" +Ey tightened eir arms around the skunk for a squeeze, kissed her atop the head, then stepped back. "All the same, just stay safe, alright?" She sniffled and nodded. "You too, my dear. Good luck, and do not die." diff --git a/writing/post-self/mitzvot/010.md b/writing/post-self/mitzvot/010.md index 571874d3..e29683fa 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/mitzvot/010.md +++ b/writing/post-self/mitzvot/010.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ ----- -Ioan wasn't sure what ey was expecting, stepping back home. Certainly all of the instances of May had quit as soon as they left, and hopefully that meant that there wouldn't be any more reputation-analyst-*cum*-assassins lingering around. All ey could hope is that ey wouldn't find any core dumps, just in case one of them had somehow killed one of her forks. It was vanishingly unlikely, given that the virus embedded in those symbolic objects --- the syringes and knives and who knows what else --- had to be tailored to whoever the target was. +Ioan wasn't sure what ey was expecting, stepping back home. Certainly all of the instances of May had quit as soon as they'd left, and hopefully that meant that there wouldn't be any more reputation-analyst-*cum*-assassins lingering around. All ey could hope is that ey wouldn't find any core dumps, just in case one of them had somehow killed one of her forks. It was vanishingly unlikely, given that the virus embedded in those symbolic objects --- the syringes and knives and who knows what else --- had to be tailored to whoever the target was. *Unless they're after the whole stanza or the whole clade,* ey thought, lingering in the entryway, ears strained to listen for sounds coming from deeper within the house. The entryway took the form of a short hallway that led into a large, rectangular room comprising a den, dining room, and kitchen, and at least the space directly ahead of em was clear.