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@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ Finally, she said, "Are you able to address my first request?"
 
 "That is another complex question. It is not yet time to have that conversation."
 
-She nodded. "To make sure that I am understanding correctly, you are not comfortable explaining how it is that each race went from a biological form to an uploaded form. *Anem?*"
+She nodded. "To make sure that I am understanding correctly, you are not comfortable explaining how it is that each race went from a biological form to an uploaded form at this point. *Anem?*"
 
 "*Ato esles,*" Turun Ko said. *Except us.* "Would be better to describe-explain us as post-biological. Physical form to uploaded-embedded form."