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 * Past arc (Secession)
     * System
         * Michelle Hadje
+            * Still trying to deal with the lingering sensations from being lost
+            * Doing her best to shape the system as it will be (reputation market, sensoria, perisystem architecture), basically acting as steering committee along with a few others.
         * The Only Time I know My True Name Is When I Dream (True Name)
             * Campaigns for individual rights and secession from Sys-side
     * Offline
@@ -33,7 +35,7 @@ The secession of the system and launch of the extra-solar system.
             * Diiistant cousin of Michelle, always feels some strange connection to her, too shy to communicate
         * de (because why not be goofy with names, it's the dang future)
             * Member of collective
-            * Wants to prevent launch for ???
+            * Wants to prevent launch b/c Earth is kinda falling apart and it resents that.
 
 # Brief outline
 
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 * [ ] Epigraph
 * [ ] Act I
-    * [ ]  
 * [ ] Act II
 * [ ] Act III
 * [ ] Conclusion