From dc53ad741c5781df47cb53a1de219c24d5b4ed68 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Madison Scott-Clary Date: Fri, 29 Jul 2022 20:10:06 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] update from sparkleup --- writing/post-self/mitzvot/023.md | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/writing/post-self/mitzvot/023.md b/writing/post-self/mitzvot/023.md index e51afaed..4c58d5b7 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/mitzvot/023.md +++ b/writing/post-self/mitzvot/023.md @@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ Once they were all inside and Debarre had cooled off, Douglas asked, "So what do They laughed. -"But I'd been thinking much the same, I guess. If she does disappear, I'd probably feel at least a little bit of vindication for the way she jerked us all around without us realising it and all that shit she did with the Council. I'd also feel like there was a fraction less of my friend around, though, too. I love E.W., I'm happy he's in my life, we get along well for the most part, but there's also this layer of, like...well, he was part of Sasha and Michelle, and they and I went through a lot together." +"But I'd been thinking much the same, I guess. If she does disappear, I'd probably feel at least a little bit of vindication for the way she jerked us all around without us realizing it and all that shit she did with the Council. I'd also feel like there was a fraction less of my friend around, though, too. I love E.W., I'm happy he's in my life, we get along well for the most part, but there's also this layer of, like...well, he was part of Sasha and Michelle, and they and I went through a lot together." "You talk about those two facets like different people," Ioan said. "Sorry, not to derail. Just that I noticed that. None of the Odists do." @@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ They laughed. Ioan furrowed eir brow. "Really? -"Yeah. That she collapsed made me confront the fact that, no, I don't really want her dead or anything, that I really would hate to lose her. Even if she's not the part of my friend I like the most, not a part that I even remember seeing before, she's still *a* part of them." He hesitated, then added, "And it changed E.W. Not the forking and merging itself, but that he even did that. It sounds like May Then My Name used the fact that True Name was all worked up to force her to accept the whole merge all at once. She kind of did the same with E.W. I don't know what her message, was, but it looked like it scared the shit out of him, so he kind of did it without really thinking. They'd been talking about about Zacharias the last few days." +"Yeah. That she collapsed made me confront the fact that, no, I don't really want her dead or anything, that I really would hate to lose her. Even if she's not the part of my friend I like the most, not a part that I even remember seeing before, she's still *a* part of them." He hesitated, then added, "And it changed E.W. Not the forking and merging itself, but that he even did that. It sounds like May Then My Name used the fact that True Name was all worked up to force her to accept the whole merge all at once. She kind of did the same with E.W. I don't know what her message, was, but it looked like it scared the shit out of him, so he kind of did it without really thinking. They'd been talking about about Zacharias the last few days, I do know that." "Since her and True Name's conversation about him?"