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0. [X] Epigraph --- Ecclesiastes 3:15
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1. [X] Act I
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1. [X] Epigraph --- Ecclesiastes 3:15
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2. [X] Act I
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* [X] Chapter: [RJ 001](RJ/001) --- Rehearsal night
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* [X] Chapter: [RJ 002](RJ/002) --- Crown Pub with Sasha
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* [X] Chapter: [Ioan 001](Ioan/001) --- First message from Dear
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* [X] Chapter: [Carter 001](Carter/001-b) --- gets a hunch on the train
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* [X] Chapter: [Ioan 002](Ioan/002) --- Ioan meets Dear
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* [X] Chapter: [RJ 004](RJ/004-b) --- RJ gets lost
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2. [O] Act II
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3. [O] Act II
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* [X] Chapter: [Carter 002](Carter/002) --- Sanders vs Carter, Carter's space
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* [X] Chapter: [RJ 005](RJ/005-a) --- Investigating auditorium
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* [X] Chapter: [Ioan 003](Ioan/003-a) --- AES message, the puzzle begins
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* [O] Chapter: [Carter 009](Carter/009) --- Carter calls out, Prakash warns, works with Sasha and Debarre, Sasha gets lost, seen by Carter gives hint to mirror rig
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* [O] Chapter: [RJ 014](RJ/014) --- explores memory instead of will, finds deck in eir exo, then way more, struggling to forget
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* [O] Chapter: [Carter 010](Carter/010) --- Messages Caitlin and Johansson, heads to RJ, threatened by mooks
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* [O] Chapter: [RJ 015](RJ/015) --- deduces meaning of getting loss
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3. [O] Act III
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4. [O] Act III
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* [O] Chapter: [Ioan 007](Ioan/007) --- Mustering the Odists
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* [-] Chapter: [Carter 011](Carter/011) --- makes it to RJ, gets mirror rig in place, gets attacked, Caitlin fights mooks while Carter dives in. (REJECTED merged with next chapter)
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* [O] Chapter: [RJ 015](RJ/015) --- deduces meaning of getting loss
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* [-] Chapter: <!--[Carter 011](Carter/011) - makes it to RJ, gets mirror rig in place, gets attacked, Caitlin fights mooks while Carter dives in.--> (REJECTED merged with next chapter)
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* [O] Chapter: [Qoheleth 004](Qoheleth/004) --- Qoheleth is patient
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* [O] Chapter: [RJ 016](RJ/016) --- going crazy, bending world to eir whim.
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* [O] Chapter: [Ioan 008](Ioan/008) --- Ready to head out
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* [O] Chapter: [Carter 011](Carter/011) RJ surprised to see Carter there, resists leaving as the sudden aspect of something not being in control is a shock
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* [O] Chapter: [RJ 016](RJ/016) --- going crazy, bending world to eir whim.
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* [O] Chapter: [Qoheleth 005](Qoheleth/005) --- Qoheleth gets Dear's ping
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* [O] Chapter: [Sasha 003](Sasha/003) --- endless field of dandelions, then suddenly Debarre, pulled back, brought up to speed on what Carter learned about how to rescue lost and the conspiracy
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* [O] Chapter: [Ioan 009](Ioan/009) --- Qoheleth gives his speech, is assassinated
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* [O] Chapter: [Qoheleth 006](Qoheleth/006) --- Assassinated
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* [-] Chapter: [Sasha 004](Sasha/004) --- ~~Sasha and Debarre publish evidence, Carter passes to Prakash, spreads like wildfire~~ News stories? Maybe not even necessary. (REJECTED given to Carter, plus Sasha's eulogy)
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* [O] Chapter: [Carter 011](Carter/011) RJ surprised to see Carter there, resists leaving as the sudden aspect of something not being in control is a shock
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* [O] Chapter: [Ioan 010](Ioan/010) --- Wrapping up with Dear, Serene, Praiseworthy
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4. [O] Denouement
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* [O] Chapter: [Sasha 003](Sasha/003) --- endless field of dandelions, then suddenly Debarre, pulled back, brought up to speed on what Carter learned about how to rescue lost and the conspiracy
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* [-] Chapter: <!-- [Sasha 004](Sasha/004) - ~~Sasha and Debarre publish evidence, Carter passes to Prakash, spreads like wildfire~~ News stories? Maybe not even necessary.--> (REJECTED given to Carter, plus Sasha's eulogy)
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5. [O] Denouement
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* [O] Chapter: [Ioan 011](Ioan/011) --- Ioan merges, begins to write, (sends Dear a sensorium message on a whim asking if ey might send a long-lived fork to stay with em to write, discuss Umwelt. Codrin Bălan, perhaps? Or Codruţ? From Romanian codru, 'woods'. Maybe asks Dear how this works. Ioan from John re bible, names important)
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* [O] Chapter: [Sasha](Sasha/005) --- Sasha at/after funeral, learn she's Michelle Hadje
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6. [O] Epilogue
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* [O] Chapter: [RJ 017](RJ/017) --- Ode in letter/suicide note to Sasha
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* [-] Chapter: Qian Guowei --- Gets next assignment REJECTED maybe? Heck. I don't know if this fits any longer.
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* [-] Chapter: <!-- Qian Guowei - Gets next assignment REJECTED maybe? Heck. I don't know if this fits any longer.--> (REJECTED cheapens the ending)
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