diff --git a/writing/post-self/neviim/index.md b/writing/post-self/neviim/index.md index 1cc25f43..47925919 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/neviim/index.md +++ b/writing/post-self/neviim/index.md @@ -42,11 +42,11 @@ Prophet aspect: Artemisians have been at this longer, start giving advice, etc, * Climax??? Maybe there is a subversive faction of both humans and aliens who figures out how to break through the DMZ on each? Or perhaps humans are invited to join the other 4 species on the ship, also expand the DMZ (can't/won't change it from one-way, but folks can send forks into it to live, communicate through perisystem border. Codrin finally figures eir shit out so ey can make the proposal to also send forks to the DMZ, tickles Dear because can't merge forks back * Denouement: Who's upset? Who's happy? Why? What's next? * Notes: - * [ ] Codrin not sure how ey feels about always being the amanuensis for everything big. Not tired, really, but frustrated? + * [o] Codrin not sure how ey feels about always being the amanuensis for everything big. Not tired, really, but frustrated? * [ ] Tangents/interludes throughout about how The History and Mythos affected launch-side society, maybe also sys-side via transmissions - * [ ] Maybe Tycho dies, or invests entire in the remote ship, then gets the Sarah Williams quote read at memorial? - * [ ] Codrin struggles with feeling completely reactive and unable to be proactive. It's not that ey doesn't want to take on the project, but ey feels obligated to; it's not that ey can't decide whether or not to join the Artemis, but that ey can't do so unless Dear and its partner do so first. Eir character arc is that ey gets over that. - * [ ] Artemisians don't have forking (except for very special cases like representatives), but have time management and reproduction (even between species) + * [o] Maybe Tycho dies, or invests entire in the remote ship, then gets the Sarah Williams quote read at memorial? + * [o] Codrin struggles with feeling completely reactive and unable to be proactive. It's not that ey doesn't want to take on the project, but ey feels obligated to; it's not that ey can't decide whether or not to join the Artemis, but that ey can't do so unless Dear and its partner do so first. Eir character arc is that ey gets over that. + * [o] Artemisians don't have forking (except for very special cases like representatives), but have time management and reproduction (even between species) * [o] From Toledot: Time Is A Finger Pointing At Itself stanza is the one that got Ioan and May into theatre * [ ] Secondrace hates forking in general; very few join Castor, just as very few joined fourthrace. * [ ] Conflict notes: @@ -154,12 +154,12 @@ Stolon talking with Tycho very informal and slangy, also a bit spotty on English * [ ] [Codrin Bălan#Artemis](local/codrin/011) --- Codrin gives Turun Ko a copy of *On the Origin of Our World* (against TN's suggestion, but she is in damage-control mode), which, after (**pronoun**) reads it, turns out to be the penultimate step towards moving forward with accepting as fifthrace. Yay Codrin * [ ] [Tycho Brahe#Artemis](local/tycho/013) --- Steals time with Stolon on break, joined by Iska and Sarah, talk about joining Artemis, what races have learned from each other re: science. * [ ] [Tycho Brahe#Emissary](remote/tycho/005) --- Watching talks resume, starting to think y'know what, fuck it, maybe he'll just stay if allowed. Stolon's neat, the science is good, and having this to look forward to has given him more purpose in life. Interrupts talk to mention such regardless of glares from TN. Silence from Artemisians, one can assume internal chatter, then "that was the final gating step - wanting to join. We will welcome you as fifthrace" - from there they will learn all they want, have X days to do exchange, share entire libraries back and forth on data band, can keep format however they want on Castor. TN FROWNS but WHATEVER FINE -* [ ] Conclusion - DMZ expands, several upload to Artemis +* [.] Conclusion - DMZ expands, several upload to Artemis * [ ] [Tycho Brahe](local/tycho/014) --- Fresh out of talks, merges back with #tracker in sim, looks up at the sky, new big feelings, TN shows up w/champagne. She's kind of sad, but guess it went okay, says she's trying to be earnest about just wanting to have something to celebrate with someone else, but isn't sure she knows how anymore. Cracks showing as growth collides with eternal memory. - * [ ] [Codrin Bălan](local/codrin/012) --- Talks with Sarah back at home about what things will look like going forward (expand DMZ to idk like 1/3 system size, allow Artemisians to join, allow any to join Artemis as fifthrace). After Sarah leaves, goes for a walk with Dear, mentions what happened with AWNH and TN - * [ ] [Interlude](interlude/004) --- Ioan and May discuss ramifications on history/mythos, and how none of the Bălans want to write it; Codrin learned the Name; news from Castor is shown to be shaped well by TN/Jonas, data dump from Artemis arriving only after local TN/Jonas have shaped expectations, etc, Odists do a therapy + * [.] [Codrin Bălan](local/codrin/012) --- Talks with Sarah back at home about what things will look like going forward (expand DMZ to idk like 1/3 system size, allow Artemisians to join, allow any to join Artemis as fifthrace). After Sarah leaves, goes for a walk with Dear, mentions what happened with AWNH and TN * [ ] [Tycho Brahe](local/tycho/015) --- The DMZ expands, sets up a border crossing of sorts, starts to think about what to do, about how there's this idea that he invest fully that just showed up, fully formed, in his head * [ ] [Codrin Bălan](local/codrin/013) --- Convinces Dear and partner to join em in both DMZ (Do they stay? Maybe Codrin is so giddy ey doesn't even care if they do) - Will ey write a history? No, that's for Genet, ey's done. Ey might become a librarian!!!! A solution to boredom? Boredom finally a problem? + * [ ] [Interlude](interlude/004) --- Ioan and May discuss ramifications on history/mythos, and how none of the Bălans want to write it; Codrin learned the Name; news from Castor is shown to be shaped well by TN/Jonas, data dump from Artemis arriving only after local TN/Jonas have shaped expectations, etc, Odists do a therapy * [ ] Epilogue * [ ] [Tycho Brahe](local/tycho/016) --- invests fully, ceremony a la Sasha's eulogy, see both local and Artemis view from him