update from sparkleup

writing/post-self/qoheleth/Carter/005.md

@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ Carter nodded. "And then you tried to pull em back out?"
 
 "Nothing. It's like ey was still delved in even after eir contacts had been displaced. We hit the panic button and called the docs. I guess some ambulance-chaser caught up with them, which is how you found out about us."
 
-"Yeah. I'm not really in the habit of checking the tabloids myself, but I went out out for lunch with a few coworkers and we got one pushed on us. The bit about you not being able to contact us got my attention, so I figured I'd make for the show tonight. Thought that might be my best bet."
+"Yeah. I'm not really in the habit of checking the tabloids myself, but I went out for lunch with a few coworkers and we got one pushed on us. The bit about you not being able to contact us got my attention, so I figured I'd make for the show tonight. Thought that might be my best bet."
 
 "How'd you even manage that, on opening night, anyway?"
 

writing/post-self/qoheleth/Ioan/006.md

@@ -151,7 +151,7 @@ Dear's partner nodded. "So it did its best to forget."
 
 All the same, ey prowled through eir memories. Even just those from the time ey had been spending with Dear. They were jumbled, sure, and lots of impressions, but no, nothing was forgotten that ey could think of. With focus, ey could recall the entire afternoon on the prairie with startling precision.
 
-"I'll spare you the details by passing on some thoughts from Dear," they said. "We aren't gifted with eidetic memories when we upload, but neither can we truly forget anything we experience after that point. It's as thought each memory is labeled with a priority level from zero to ten, and when it hits zero, it's forgotten. Except the actual scale only goes down to naught-point-oh-oh-oh-oh-one or something. We can kick it way to to the back of our minds, down the priority list, but we can't forget it. The system won't let us."
+"I'll spare you the details by passing on some thoughts from Dear," they said. "We aren't gifted with eidetic memories when we upload, but neither can we truly forget anything we experience after that point. It's as thought each memory is labeled with a priority level from zero to ten, and when it hits zero, it's forgotten. Except the actual scale only goes down to naught-point-oh-oh-oh-oh-one or something. We can kick it way to the back of our minds, down the priority list, but we can't forget it. The system won't let us."
 
 Ioan nodded. "So Dear tried to forget, tried to kick that memory all the way to the back of its mind. What does that have to do with being a fox, though?"
 

writing/post-self/qoheleth/Ioan/010.md

@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ Life breeds life, but death must now be chosen.
 
 Ioan nodded.
 
-*"It's like I said. Batty. They're all batty."* It stared at its paws, one of them brushing through Serene's forearm fur. *"It's like some sort of Methuselah syndrome, or reverse Alzheimer's. Instead of being doomed for forget, we're doomed to remember. Doomed to remember everything. We can't forget, and it all gets to be too much for one mind."*
+*"It's like I said. Batty. They're all batty."* It stared at its paws, one of them brushing through Serene's forearm fur. *"It's like some sort of Methuselah syndrome, or reverse Alzheimer's. Instead of being doomed to forget, we're doomed to remember. Doomed to remember everything. We can't forget, and it all gets to be too much for one mind."*
 
 "What about exos?"
 

writing/post-self/qoheleth/RJ/005-a.md

@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ Throughout all of the practice runs, the endless training on the rig that had go
 
 And with that, AwDae should've found emself back in the tech booth, trying to figure out what strange loop the theater had gotten itself into that would have frozen eir rig.
 
-The lockers never wavered, though, and now ey found emself stuck in eir old high school school with no contact to the world outside of whatever this place was.
+The lockers never wavered, though, and now ey found emself stuck in eir old high school with no contact to the world outside of whatever this place was.
 
 Ey screamed.