diff --git a/writing/post-self/motes/007b.md b/writing/post-self/motes/007b.md index f0a5df09..e63e0281 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/motes/007b.md +++ b/writing/post-self/motes/007b.md @@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ Quelling her shame, she straightened herself up as best she could, deciding not Despite the stinging of new tears in her eyes, she nodded. "Not particularly, but I am here. How did you know that Motes was overflowing?" -A Finger Pointing hesitated frowned, and pulled a letter from her pocket, handing it over to the skunk. "This. I did not *know* that Dot was overflowing until I got here and saw her door shut tight. I was not at all surprised when you told me." +A Finger Pointing hesitated, frowned, and pulled a letter from her pocket, handing it over to the skunk. "This. I did not *know* that Dot was overflowing until I got here and saw her door shut tight. I was not at all surprised when you told me." As Beholden read through the letter, her lips curled up into a snarl, and she could feel a low growl build in her chest. "'I expect better'!" she muttered darkly, stamping her foot. "Jesus *fucking* Christ. 'Grounded in reality' indeed."