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update from sparkleup

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Madison Scott-Clary 2020-11-30 22:49:26 -08:00
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writing/unseeing/index.md
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@ -11,6 +11,8 @@ Conflict: a fae character (presence?) gives him sight - the narrator? "I gave hi
* Ýng is nonbinary, They/Their. NB: go back and capitalize.
* Fix tenses, they're all over the place
* More scent, more tactility - whiskers etc
* More detail later on, since there's so much early on. Describe seed cakes, describe the light and how confusing it is, describe how childlike he feels
## Characters

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(The village is confused why the holy one is there)
(Lyut is overwhelmed by so many people after so long alone, sneaks back to his cave)
(Zita returns and says that the villagers are ecstatic, but confused as to next steps, so they pray again)