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 # Michelle Hadje/Sasha --- 2151
 
-In the endless, rolling, field of dandelions, five people gathered.
+In the endless, rolling field of dandelions, five people gathered.
 
 Two of them were shaped like a woman. Short. Dark, curly hair. Round of cheek and soft of eye.