update from sparkleup

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Madison Scott-Clary 2021-09-24 16:31:29 -07:00
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@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ Nearing the 200th anniversary of System secession from humanity, the System and
* [O] [Secession: phys-side: Yared](secession/phys/Yared/002) - Yared gives a 'speech' on individual rights, then drawn aside by Yosef, out for coffee, tells of secession proposal - 2608
* [o] [Launch: phys-side: Douglas](launch/phys/Douglas/003) - Douglas answers May's questions - 3489
* [o] Part II - Progression
* [o] [Launch: sys-side: Ioan](launch/sys/Ioan/003) - Ioan(s) and May start to parcel out work, but get off topic onto feelings. - 2644
* [O] [Launch: sys-side: Ioan](launch/sys/Ioan/003) - Ioan(s) and May start to parcel out work, but get off topic onto feelings. - 2644
* [O] [Secession: phys-side: Yared](secession/phys/Yared/003) - first change from Yosef, talking with True Name and Jonas - 2791
* [o] [Secession: sys-side: True Name](secession/sys/True-Name/001) - brings news of the bill to Council of Eight, discuss speciation - 1833
* [o] [Launch: launch-side: Codrin#Pollux](launch/launch/Codrin-pollux/001) - Codrin#Pollux interviews Dear about why it actually uploaded - 1767
@ -126,7 +126,7 @@ Nearing the 200th anniversary of System secession from humanity, the System and
* [X] Quote: *She stood from her chair and walked up to where ey remained stubbornly seated. "If you do not wish to be unhappy with the answers to difficult questions, Ioan," she said, tousling eir hair. "Then you do not need to ask them."* / *She smiled down to em, and in that smile was kindness, and in that kindness was a hatred ey could not fathom, and then she quit.*
* [X] Dear says in Qoheleth that it uploaded in the 2130s after the L5 station had been set up, have to address this incongruence (either shift dates, or give it a reason to lie; probably the latter, to downplay stuff to one it does not yet trust)
* [X] True Name and Jonas begin wielding more and more power within the council despite the promise that forks will not influence balance of power, leads to Debarre and user11824 leaving council
* [ ] Normalize "LVs", capitalizing Secession, launch arms vs struts (struts at base, arms at tips), Council of Eight only exists in Secession (now viewed as i.e: founding fathers), Ioan/Codrin's pronouns
* [ ] Normalize "LVs", capitalizing Secession, launch arms vs struts (struts at base, arms at tips), Council of Eight only exists in Secession (now viewed as i.e: founding fathers), (Ioan/Codrin's pronouns)
* [X] Easy to cut people off, build enclaves, isolate (thus "System freeze"); w/o shortages, leads to complacency, easy to govern/steer w/o big deal
* [ ] Add timestamps to extramural conversations?
* [ ] Need more "there is no going and there is no back" throughout beginning

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@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ Douglas nodded, though he knew Ioan couldn't see him. Holding in his mind the ju
Suddenly, as if it had always been there, he felt the thin fabric beneath his hands. There were even the briefs beneath that. "Weird," he mumbled.
"Can I turn around now?"
"May I turn around now?"
He looked down at himself, along his arms and legs, seeing that the oh-so-familiar jumpsuit was just as he remembered, then said, "Sure."
@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ He was surprised at how relieved he felt, even laughing as he accepted the hand
Ioan blinked, then nodded, grinning. "Right, right. Well, how're you feeling? I remember I was pretty disoriented for a while after uploading."
Douglas looked around. The walls offered little but more gray and a faint grid of darker grey, as though made of panels a meter on a side. Ioan looked...well, normal, is all he could think. Ey looked like a normal person of Eastern European stock. Eir clothes looked as detailed as could be expected phys-side, and eir hand felt as much like a normal hand as any. "It's so...normal," he said, finally.
Douglas looked around. The walls offered little but more gray and a faint grid of darker grey, as though made of panels a meter on a side. Ioan looked...well, ordinary, is all he could think. Ey looked like a normal person of Eastern European stock. Eir clothes looked as detailed as could be expected phys-side, and eir hand felt as much like a normal hand as any. "It's so...normal," he said, finally.
"Yeah, I guess it is. I'm nearing a century here, so I'm used to it."
@ -98,7 +98,7 @@ Douglas nodded and focused on keeping his eyes open. Just to be safe, he thought
He watched as that other version of him hesitated, closed his eyes, breathed in, and then disappeared. After that, it was just as Ioan had said, as though there were a pressure of memories. He focused on them, and realized he *could* remember. He could remember shouting and jumping, remember watching Ioan and himself have conversation.
"Very weird..." he mumbled
"Very weird," he mumbled
"You'll get used to it over time. You're in it for the long haul, now."
@ -182,7 +182,7 @@ May Then My Name reacted with a speed he'd not expected, whirling around and clu
Remembering Ioan's first words, he grinned. "Can you guess?"
She straightened up frowned, then turned to Ioan, who looked to be holding back laughter, and punched him solidly in the shoulder. "You...you piece of shit! *You* organized this! I know you did! I am absolutely putting sand in your shoes."
She straightened up frowned, then turned to Ioan, who looked to be holding back laughter, and punched em solidly in the shoulder. "You...you piece of shit! *You* organized this! I know you did! I am absolutely putting sand in your shoes."
The skunk leapt at him and, before he could react, nearly tackled him to the ground, her arms tight around his middle. "If you are not Douglas Hadje, master of spaceflight and doctor of something boring, I will be quite embarrassed. Please tell me you are."