From f52b4dc13e3f0767eca4b45c9f93e5100ddcbbdc Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Madison Scott-Clary Date: Sun, 7 Nov 2021 00:55:04 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] update from sparkleup --- writing/post-self/toledot/launch/launch/Codrin-castor/004.md | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/writing/post-self/toledot/launch/launch/Codrin-castor/004.md b/writing/post-self/toledot/launch/launch/Codrin-castor/004.md index 695137f8..e5ff5fe0 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/toledot/launch/launch/Codrin-castor/004.md +++ b/writing/post-self/toledot/launch/launch/Codrin-castor/004.md @@ -136,7 +136,7 @@ Codrin frowned. "Most everyone I talked to was as ambivalent about the launch as "Correct." -"What about who was having those arguments." +"What about who was having those arguments?" "That's the thing, there were relatively few voices from those who had uploaded recently. Most of those who started the arguments were from the first few decades of the System's creation. I suspect that at least part of their concern is that they still feel somewhat upset at having to pay to join, some of them dearly so, but even that doesn't feel like the whole reason. It was just all these super old uploads, both individuals and clades, who seemed less than thrilled at the prospect. Founder types, you understand." @@ -152,7 +152,7 @@ Was this another lie from Dear, or had the fox simply not gone looking for names "I'm not sure," Codrin said, mouth dry. "Perhaps it was more of an image thing? As in, adding the module might damage how others viewed the launch." -"Perhaps." Ey heard Brahe shrug against the moss-grass, then continue. "Anyway, that's the story. I don't know if it'll be of any use to you in your project." +"Perhaps." Ey heard Brahe shrug against the moss-grass before he continued. "Anyway, that's the story. I don't know if it'll be of any use to you in your project." "It might. It already answered most of my other questions, too. The last one I have is that you invested entirely in the LVs. Why?"