From f91ff446c7bc6ac158c859ce893409375c282f09 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Madison Scott-Clary Date: Mon, 10 Oct 2022 15:40:05 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] update from sparkleup --- writing/post-self/marsh/001.md | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/writing/post-self/marsh/001.md b/writing/post-self/marsh/001.md index 83d47b51..fe9d0da9 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/marsh/001.md +++ b/writing/post-self/marsh/001.md @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ Reed laughed and bumped their shoulder against Hanne's. "A sales pitch?" -"Yeah," she said, leaning briefly against them as they walked. "I'm in the market for a new year. Sell me 2368. I've got a wide variety to choose from, so tell me why you decided to live through this one." +"Yeah," she said, leaning briefly against them as they walked. "I'm in the market for a new year. Sell me the 2368 model. I've got a wide variety to choose from, so tell me why you decided to live through this one." "You're a nerd. You realize that, right?" @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ Reed scuffed their heel against the pavement of the street. New Year's Eve, and And here they were, Reed and Hanne, arm in arm, strolling leisurely down the street, heedless of the passersby, to celebrate the last day of 2368, systime 244+365. -"If you're looking for the utmost comfort, then it's really hard to go wrong with 2368. The ride was just about as smooth as could be." +"If you're looking for the utmost in luxury, then it's really hard to go wrong with 2368. The ride was just about as smooth as could be." "How about comfort?"