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 # Ioan Bălan --- 2346
 
-> *Convergence T-plus 19 days, 18 hours, 16 minutes*  
-> *(transmission delay: 7 days, 5 hours, 32 minutes)*
+> *Convergence T-plus 50 days, 8 hours, 16 minutes*  
+> *(transmission delay: 30 days, 14 hours, 37 minutes)*
 
 While Ioan could not say that the changes in May since the therapy had started in earnest were dramatic, they were immediate. Just subtle changes in the way she talked, for the most part. Ey suspected that many of them would fade over time, but for now, ey was curious to watch the ways in which she would occasionally catch herself up short, reevaluate what she was in the process of saying, and then continue more carefully. Ey was also pleased to see her journaling, as the skunk was not one for sitting down and writing, preferring to keep everything in her head unless she absolutely needed to.
 
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ She beamed proudly.
 
 "It did, yes. What did Codrin have to say about her?"
 
-"Eir letter read like someone struggling not to cry," ey said. "Ey sounded crushed. From the sounds of it, they were together only ten minutes and ey still felt like ey lost a good friend."
+"Eir letter read like someone struggling not to cry. Ey sounded crushed," ey said. "From the sounds of it, they were together only ten minutes and ey still felt like ey lost a good friend."
 
 "That, and knowing some version of emself would never see her partners again. I think there needs to be a new word for the empathy one has for someone who is oneself and yet not," May said, nodding. "It is the same feeling I have for True Name. Ey is not leaving eir partners behind, and yet ey feels that empathy with Sorina, who is. I am not struggling with the same problems that True Name is, and yet I am not so different from her that I cannot share in some of that understanding."