From ff730dbb8b1d9113976ce37ac998412239636b85 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Madison Scott-Clary Date: Thu, 6 Jan 2022 12:05:05 -0800 Subject: [PATCH] update from sparkleup --- diary/2022-01-06.md | 14 +++++++++++--- 1 file changed, 11 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/diary/2022-01-06.md b/diary/2022-01-06.md index ef5770e7..d3929ec4 100644 --- a/diary/2022-01-06.md +++ b/diary/2022-01-06.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# Surprise day 2 +# MFA --- Surprise day 2 --- Jennifer Knox 1. Possession --- reader can see the subject everywhere in the setting * Tracers, Echoes, Reflections, Mutations @@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ * Too many suits move in too many lines. They circle banquet tables, hawk-eyed, hunting crudites, canapés, bruscheta. - Fingers ferry food, flipperlike, finding + Fingers ferry food --- fish, perhaps --- finding slack-jawed mouths already open, squawking at wayward children or bemoaning The Market, @@ -41,5 +41,13 @@ doing all they can to convince each other through well-rehearsed performances, that this must be the case. - The bereaved already sit graveside, silent. + The silently bereaved already sit graveside. +2. Tigers and clouds + * Specific vs nonspecific + * Everything/everybody is a ratio of tigers to clouds + * Attention suggests worthiness, power, love + * Misdirection = conscious or unconscious + * Surprise = expectations + * The automatic brain says "That *deserves* + * Fact: the more numerous your specifics are, the more likely they are to be wrong or a lie (paper)