From 011e59dd15cf6a6b5121660bed2106a2d3dc8c8a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Madison Scott-Clary <makyo@drab-makyo.com>
Date: Thu, 15 Sep 2022 21:45:40 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] update from sparkleup

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 <h4 id="ideas_2">Ideas</h4>
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-<p><a href="neviim/local/codrin/004.html">Emissaries&rsquo; dinner in Tycho&rsquo;s sim</a></p>
+<p><del><a href="neviim/local/codrin/004.html">Emissaries&rsquo; dinner in Tycho&rsquo;s sim</a></del> (too dark)</p>
 <p>Shortly after the list of emissaries are picked, they all gather along with Dear in Tycho&rsquo;s sim for dinner. His sim is a mossy meadow in the midst of a ring of forest in the pacific northwest. It acts as a dark-sky sight for naked-eye astronomy, so it&rsquo;s basically a forest at night. They have dinner in the field at a table with a single candle lighting them. It&rsquo;d be pretty dark, but who knows, maybe it could work.</p>
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-<p>Tycho and True Name talking in his sim &mdash; <a href="neviim/local/tycho/002.html">first time</a>, <a href="neviim/local/tycho/014.html">second time</a></p>
+<p><del>Tycho and True Name talking in his sim &mdash; <a href="neviim/local/tycho/002.html">first time</a>, <a href="neviim/local/tycho/014.html">second time</a></del> (too dark)</p>
 <p>Twice during the book, Tycho and True Name have a conversation in his sim, that same dark field. They use red-tinted flashlights to watch what they&rsquo;re doing. During the first meeting, they keep them nearby and pointed towards them so that they can see each others&rsquo; expressions. During the second, they share champagne after the successful talks, though they do so mostly in the dark without the flashlights.</p>
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@@ -307,6 +307,10 @@ img {
 <p>During the conference, True Name grabs Answers Will Not Help, who is slowly losing her mind and has said the Name, by the blouse. Obviously, everyone is kind of freaked out by this, so they all jolt away from the action, meaning Codrin, Tycho, and Sarah jolting to the side and the Artemisians, if shown, jolting back.</p>
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+<p><a href="https://makyo.wiki/writing/post-self/neviim/remote/codrin/007.html">True Name&rsquo;s fucking exhausted</a></p>
+<p>She&rsquo;s having a really hard time keeping it together, and despite sleeping as much as she can, she never seems to get any rest. After Codrin helps her write a letter, she winds up just sitting on the edge of her bed, looking completely fucking wiped. The room&rsquo;s kind of dorm room situation. Bare walls, a window, a desk, a bed. not much else.</p>
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+<li>
 <p><a href="neviim/ioan/010.html">Ioan, May, End Waking, Debarre, A Finger Pointing, and Douglas camping out</a></p>
 <p>Ioan and May visit End Waking&rsquo;s forest along with Debarre, A Finger Pointing, and Douglas Hadje, where they eat a very good stew cooked over a campfire and share stories, guessing what the Artemisians are like and talking about why time skew sucks for Odists.</p>
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+                <p>Page generated on 2022-09-15</p>
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