diff --git a/writing/post-self/toledot/launch/sys/Ioan/006.html b/writing/post-self/toledot/launch/sys/Ioan/006.html index c1059e912..6ee449525 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/toledot/launch/sys/Ioan/006.html +++ b/writing/post-self/toledot/launch/sys/Ioan/006.html @@ -56,7 +56,7 @@
“And Codrin?” she said.
“I expect ey’s struggling, in eir own way. Were I confronted with something like that, I’d be able to keep it together throughout the interview, but afterwards, I’d have to spend a lot of time just decompressing.”
“Why is that?”
-“You spend all your time up here–” Ey tapped at eir temple. “–and being confronted by the ways in which that can go wrong to someone who was, as you say, brilliant, can really mess with you. I bet ey holed himself up in that office for a while and paced a ring into the floor.”
+“You spend all your time up here–” Ey tapped at eir temple. “–and being confronted by the ways in which that can go wrong to someone who was, as you say, brilliant, can really mess with you. I bet ey holed emself up in that office for a while and paced a ring into the floor.”
If ey had been expecting a laugh or a smile from the skunk, ey was disappointed. She simply nodded and looked off into the water again. “There is nothing wrong with that, Ioan. We have known that disconnect. We have known the feeling of a mind coiled in on itself. That is frightening to all of us. It should be frightening.”
Suspecting that May would appreciate it and not knowing what to say to that, ey simply reached out and took one of her paws in eir hands.
Ey didn’t know how long they sat there like that. Ey didn’t remember what ey was thinking, or where ey looked. All ey remembered was the satiny feeling of May’s pawpads against eir skin, and the sound of a quiet lake.
@@ -91,7 +91,7 @@“Now, take me home and talk about something — anything — else for the rest of the night.”