From 0cc95b44df123cab855b46c5a222f90485e416f8 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Madison Scott-Clary Date: Tue, 21 Apr 2020 00:55:10 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] update from sparkleup --- writing/sawtooth/happy-lesbians.html | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/writing/sawtooth/happy-lesbians.html b/writing/sawtooth/happy-lesbians.html index c550afdec..e2e91b4fe 100644 --- a/writing/sawtooth/happy-lesbians.html +++ b/writing/sawtooth/happy-lesbians.html @@ -98,7 +98,7 @@

Football games became a source of dread. She wasn't even safe before they began, as she'd haul thoroughly pregamed fans from parties to stadium, groups of students hollering painfully loud, nigh unintelligible, whether from drink or simple in-jokey camaraderie.

The tasks from Simpletask, while a break from the enforced social interaction that was an integral part of driving, were riddled with their own problems. People generally expected that someone driving for GetThere knew what they were doing enough to leave them alone.

Not so with someone performing data entry from scanned documents or making brochures for events. She discovered a particular brand of cruelty that seemed unique to the role of small business owners, which they held in reserve for menial labor.

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The lynx lost track of how many times she was called an idiot.

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The lynx lost track of how many times she was called an idiot. She lost track of the number of times she was lured in by a sizeable tip, only to have it withdrawn after she had completed the project during the three-day grace period. She lost track of how often she was brought on to make someone feel bigger.

Still, she had to pay the bills, didn't she?

(An argument over something big that happened while driving. Maybe someone said something gross to Winter?) @@ -111,7 +111,7 @@ Winter don't know how long she sat in the car, forehead resting against the stee Expand all