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 <p>INT. LIVING ROOM</p>
-<p>A painfully modern house. We&rsquo;re talking concrete walls, floors of some pale wood &mdash; pine, perhaps &mdash; floor-to-ceiling windows, furniture that uses a lot of right angles, or perhaps Eames is involved somehow. On the couch sits DEAR, and anthropomorphic fox with bright white fur. Or, what used to be bright white. It&rsquo;s been stained red in spots, and it whimpers, holding one of its paws and staring down at the pads. It is wearing a poet shirt with a vest over it. Both look like they&rsquo;ve recently encountered so horrifically traumatic event. Beside it sits CODRIN, a human of Eastern European descent, appearing to be in eir mid-twenties. Ey looks equally bedraggled, though rather than an expression of pain, eirs is one of frustration. Eir white linen tunic has also been stained red in places, and the tan sarong ey wears around eir waist has picked up some unidentifiable stain down along one thigh.</p>
+<p>A painfully modern house. We&rsquo;re talking concrete walls, floors of some pale wood &mdash; pine, perhaps &mdash; floor-to-ceiling windows, furniture that uses a lot of right angles, or perhaps Eames is involved somehow. On the couch sits DEAR, and anthropomorphic fox with bright white fur. Or, what used to be bright white. It&rsquo;s been stained red in spots, and it whimpers, holding one of its paws and staring down at the pads. It is wearing a poet shirt with a waistcoat over it. Both look like they&rsquo;ve recently encountered so horrifically traumatic event. Beside it sits CODRIN, a human of Eastern European descent, appearing to be in eir mid-twenties. Ey looks equally bedraggled, though rather than an expression of pain, eirs is one of frustration. Eir white linen tunic has also been stained red in places, and the tan sarong ey wears around eir waist has picked up some unidentifiable stain down along one thigh.</p>
 <p>Sitting on a dining chair before them, THEIR PARTNER rubs their face with their hands, masters some complex emotion containing both frustration and amusement.</p>
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 <dt>Their partner</dt>